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Biscuits and Lazy
If love were
edible,
she'd of eaten
like a queen.
It is not.
She starved and died.
He supposedly tried.
edible,
she'd of eaten
like a queen.
It is not.
She starved and died.
He supposedly tried.
Published 11th Jun 2022
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11th Jun 2022 5:55pm
11th Jun 2022 6:14pm
12th Jun 2022 00:53am
Explain to me why this is so heartbreaking? Excellent minimalist write evoking such strong emotion ... pic love ... Bless and love ... .
12th Jun 2022 1:00am
12th Jun 2022 1:58am
12th Jun 2022 2:14am
Anonymous
12th Jun 2022 9:05pm
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19th Jul 2022 4:25pm
Always appreciate these minimalist pieces, leaving so much to interpret.
And your images are always so eff'n cool.
And your images are always so eff'n cool.
