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Promise Me
Promise me
We'll always be what we can't call ourselves
Undefined intrinsically
Promise me you'll always be
A click away
Promise me
Excitement
Uncharttered mind play
Exquisite in nature
Promise?
Author's Note
Life in the neo-tenderloin
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Promise Me
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8th Jun 2022 3:19am
Re. Promise Me
8th Jun 2022 3:20am
Ahh.. and since you asked, so nicely, I solemnly promise, my Big Apple, always for you due in part, you have poetic swag in your mental alluring paintings, and in the wonderous skills of your beautiful crafting hands
Enjoy your late evening on that softening oath🍎
Enjoy your late evening on that softening oath🍎
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8th Jun 2022 3:27am
What a pleasure to see you SKC
Poems are coming to me again when I'm shaving or doing other mundane things. It usually a sign of a big creative spurt.
Hopefully you're doing something fun in this beautiful late Spring weather. I always say the summer is over on the first day of summer.
I have strange issues with time ...
Many thanks for the read
Poems are coming to me again when I'm shaving or doing other mundane things. It usually a sign of a big creative spurt.
Hopefully you're doing something fun in this beautiful late Spring weather. I always say the summer is over on the first day of summer.
I have strange issues with time ...
Many thanks for the read
Re: Re. Promise Me
8th Jun 2022 3:46am
You are humbly worth the accolade, and I am trying to get back to my running capacity... so far, I am doing great, and thank you for asking,
May the muse(s) inspire you to write as your heart is content, as skillful hands steadily surrender you to your passion of choices... always
May the muse(s) inspire you to write as your heart is content, as skillful hands steadily surrender you to your passion of choices... always
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Re. Promise Me
8th Jun 2022 4:08am
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8th Jun 2022 11:58am
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8th Jun 2022 4:25am
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8th Jun 2022 11:59am
Re. Promise Me
8th Jun 2022 5:17am
Hello. Your poem and painting are wonderful.
I think your painting doesn’t look undefined intrinsically. It looks like an intrinsically woven pattern of fabric as worn by the woman who’s face is captured in the top right corner. And for some reason, it doesn’t feel uncharted. It feels familiar and comfortable. Just my opinion.
I think your painting doesn’t look undefined intrinsically. It looks like an intrinsically woven pattern of fabric as worn by the woman who’s face is captured in the top right corner. And for some reason, it doesn’t feel uncharted. It feels familiar and comfortable. Just my opinion.
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Re: Re. Promise Me
8th Jun 2022 12:01pm
Thank you twice Her
It's been a while since I found my voice
Appreciate the great comment !
It's been a while since I found my voice
Appreciate the great comment !
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8th Jun 2022 7:17am
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8th Jun 2022 12:03pm
I think so too PD
After all the lust is spoken there's still more in the mind recesses ..
Thx !
After all the lust is spoken there's still more in the mind recesses ..
Thx !
Re. Promise Me
12th Jun 2022 00:29am
I'm loving all of your poetry.
Much more say - in all the different shades of you.
Great write amigo.
And of course - I'm your forever art groupie. LOL
Great painting!!!
Much more say - in all the different shades of you.
Great write amigo.
And of course - I'm your forever art groupie. LOL
Great painting!!!
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Re: Re. Promise Me
12th Jun 2022 3:27am
Double Love
Digging that Hot Sauce 🔥
You're my top groupie
Special privileges
Time to get this dance party started
Thx A
Digging that Hot Sauce 🔥
You're my top groupie
Special privileges
Time to get this dance party started
Thx A
Re. Promise Me
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2022 10:34am
Ah, my friend, PoetSpeak...I see that you are still one of the masters of short,declarative,multilayered, honest poetry...coupled with inventive, curious art. Bravo!
-Ted
-Ted
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Re: Re. Promise Me
22nd Jun 2022 11:57am
Appreciate the nod and credit on this one Ted
I go in streaks with painting usually a month on and a month off
This was fun to create and write words around
Thanks for the RL too
Looking forward to seeing your paintings again too
I go in streaks with painting usually a month on and a month off
This was fun to create and write words around
Thanks for the RL too
Looking forward to seeing your paintings again too
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2022 12:05pm
Right back at ya. BTW, I had wondered which came first for you, the words or the art.
(p.s.---American women HATE the mustache.) :-)
(p.s.---American women HATE the mustache.) :-)
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Re: Re. Promise Me
22nd Jun 2022 12:08pm
The art always comes first and then I write around them...
You should get street cred on the mustache for maintenance, can't be easy ....
You should get street cred on the mustache for maintenance, can't be easy ....
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2022 12:54pm
PS, The 'stache upkeep is like making love...the more one does it, the better one gets...it's a process I enjoy and I get great satisfaction, once it's done well. LOL.
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Re. Promise Me
14th Jul 2022 4:06pm
Oh the anticipation building. Promises certainly make it worth the wait.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
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14th Jul 2022 4:09pm