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Half My Problems
I feel hot
when the room is cold
I'm still young
so why do I feel so fucking old?
my feet hurt
it's hard to walk
my stomach aches
I feel like I'm about to barf
my head is always killing me
and my vision's blurred
the house is a wreak
my joints are sore
way too depressed to go outside
I got chest pains
my heart feels like it's beating fast
the doctor says I'm fine
I have trust issues
but he has no reason to lie
I'm over worked and underappreciated
I know that's part of the problem
I care way more than I let on
wish everyone would wake the fuck up!
oh, did I mention my bad additude?
everything seems dark and hopeless
maybe I should turn off the news
but then how would I ever save the world?
I have eczema
my skin inches
I'm all scarred up
people think I'm a addict
but I don't do drugs
I want sex even though I'm tired
even when I sleep I'm always fucking tired
guess I'll just jack my dick off
too the nastiest of porn
while I re-evaluate my life
I have a good plan together
but I'm also lazy as fuck
or just overwhelmed
might think that doesn't sound so bad
but I only covered half my problems
when the room is cold
I'm still young
so why do I feel so fucking old?
my feet hurt
it's hard to walk
my stomach aches
I feel like I'm about to barf
my head is always killing me
and my vision's blurred
the house is a wreak
my joints are sore
way too depressed to go outside
I got chest pains
my heart feels like it's beating fast
the doctor says I'm fine
I have trust issues
but he has no reason to lie
I'm over worked and underappreciated
I know that's part of the problem
I care way more than I let on
wish everyone would wake the fuck up!
oh, did I mention my bad additude?
everything seems dark and hopeless
maybe I should turn off the news
but then how would I ever save the world?
I have eczema
my skin inches
I'm all scarred up
people think I'm a addict
but I don't do drugs
I want sex even though I'm tired
even when I sleep I'm always fucking tired
guess I'll just jack my dick off
too the nastiest of porn
while I re-evaluate my life
I have a good plan together
but I'm also lazy as fuck
or just overwhelmed
might think that doesn't sound so bad
but I only covered half my problems
Published 6th Jun 2022
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2022 9:48am
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6th Jun 2022 10:06am
Thanks a lot for the read. I very much appreciate it 😁 I actually find a bit of humor in my life struggles for some reason.
Anonymous
6th Jun 2022 10:49am
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6th Jun 2022 7:40pm
My God, most of the things you said is so fuckin' relatable!!!
I hope you are doing fine, dear friend...
I hope you are doing fine, dear friend...
7th Jun 2022 7:06am
I am doing good. Those everyday struggles are things I have delt with for years. Though lately it has gotten worse to a point. But that's life sometimes.
Hope you are doing well as well my friend 😁
Hope you are doing well as well my friend 😁
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jun 2022 8:29am
6th Jun 2022 9:29pm
FFS, it's like you've penetrated my inner thought sanctum!! I am sincerely empathic and at the same time completely rallying behind the ultra openness and fucking ballsy truth that just radiates unapologetically from your page. Telling it like it is, DC. You've got that killer skill.
The human condition is complex and oftentimes painful... I think we shy away from highlighting that sometimes. I'm terrifically glad you didn't... Call me selfish, but it's nice and a bit of a comfort knowing that you're not alone in experiencing certain harsh emotions life throws at you, exhaustion, aging body pains and a random disgusted malaise at the state of the world.... are just a few..
Yes, I know the age old adage of 'misery loves company' but to me it's more about reassuring like minds than it is a kinship of the miserable.
Here's to realizing there's strength in numbers and therefore.... potential problem solving to at least one half, anyway...
Phenomenal ink -
Kudos for sharing
🌹 B
The human condition is complex and oftentimes painful... I think we shy away from highlighting that sometimes. I'm terrifically glad you didn't... Call me selfish, but it's nice and a bit of a comfort knowing that you're not alone in experiencing certain harsh emotions life throws at you, exhaustion, aging body pains and a random disgusted malaise at the state of the world.... are just a few..
Yes, I know the age old adage of 'misery loves company' but to me it's more about reassuring like minds than it is a kinship of the miserable.
Here's to realizing there's strength in numbers and therefore.... potential problem solving to at least one half, anyway...
Phenomenal ink -
Kudos for sharing
🌹 B
7th Jun 2022 7:14am
What a wonderful comment, friend 😁 everyone has their battles for sure. And I for one get pretty sick of the everyday. I think the worse for me is the joint pain. It has gotten pretty bad of late and I'm a bit afraid to take anything stronger than ibuprofen. It all kind of stembs from my egzama. The medication i was on before helped with the pain but not as much with the skin. The one I am on now helps with the skin but not the pain, so it's a trade off like most of life's joys lol.
Thanks so much for the read 😁
Thanks so much for the read 😁
8th Jun 2022 6:56am
I know that there are many people facing many problems, so I understand I'm not the only one. However, sometimes it does feel like it. It's nice to relate to others on different topics. Wishing you better days.
LJ
LJ
8th Jun 2022 10:48am
Sometimes I feel like I am the only one even though many people have similar problems. Hopefully we both get better days ahead.
Thanks for the read, friend 😁
Thanks for the read, friend 😁
