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Without Parallel
Forces of fire,
Embedded
In
The aether,
Awaiting awakening
Within
A vessel that
Is
There,
Seeking to manifest
Across the
Surface
In a piercing
Of the
Veil,
Drawing back
The
Curtain,
To
Reveal
Sights without
Parallel.
Published 4th Jun 2022
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4th Jun 2022 5:01am
Dear CO,
I read this poem through a few times and keep ending with the same idea that this is like receiving a mystical piece of info from the wise oracle. I’m not really sure how to decode the info but I thought it would be cool to first off be in the presence of an oracle and then be a recipient of some life altering message. Super write. As soon as I figure what I actually mean I’ll write you back. 😊H🌷
I read this poem through a few times and keep ending with the same idea that this is like receiving a mystical piece of info from the wise oracle. I’m not really sure how to decode the info but I thought it would be cool to first off be in the presence of an oracle and then be a recipient of some life altering message. Super write. As soon as I figure what I actually mean I’ll write you back. 😊H🌷
4th Jun 2022 8:01am
Anonymous
4th Jun 2022 8:03am
This poem felt very David Lynchian to me. Lost Highway, Twin Peaks, Wild At Heart... examples of his movies /TV that all deal with different aspects of interdimensionality and sometimes, travel... parallel universes, too. He's an utterly eccentric genius (weirdo to some) that slides his characters back and forth through space, time, energy and matter.... It's fascinating, to me
That all flashed for me, upon reading your little gem.... Its got that flavour!
Thanks for taking me on a serious journey, C!
🌹 - 💙
B
That all flashed for me, upon reading your little gem.... Its got that flavour!
Thanks for taking me on a serious journey, C!
🌹 - 💙
B
It it would be equally fascinating were such characters,
sliding back and forth through space, time, energy and
matter to...
Be able to explore the labyrinth of
your fascination...
Echoing in a metapoetical, self aware multiverse...
...
Thank you for sharing your thought
provoking perspective B...
