Wings of Night1

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thanks, Im very glad this reaches you
and you have proven to me that a few words
can go a long way......
this was another attempt at minimalisation,
which I only conjured up yesterday on the spur of the moment.
Most of my pieces are longwinded, which sort of can get lost in translation :(
- but since being part of DUP Ive learned a lot already from such great writers like yourself and many others
-CIU

The title really grabbed my attention and I could already anticipate the allure of the night. And you definitely delivered with a rich gothic imagery; the black of night, the blue fames, the crimson blood, the azurean rose, and the cold transparency of rain really come together to paint such a beautiful and seductive picture. And of course vampires. ;) I felt like this piece was longer than it is because you were able to capture so much with your words. The themes are perfect, it encompasses every one so masterfully.

Im so glad you liked this that drew you in to a gothic realm which was definitely my destination,
As you intuitively stated it is longer, as it is part of a series , Wings of Night1, 2, 3, etc so theres more of this coming.  
- yesterday I was a busy little fruitbat, and constructed the 3 short parts and even researched different naming conventions for a range of darkshaded colours, to slot into the script, where appropriate, or inappropriate :)
Its encouraging that you find the piece economic, as short descriptive verses aren’t my forte, which means this new found hobby is actually working!  -Yes! (fistpump)
and that you have extracted so much out of so little, importantly the seductiveness, and I gladly quote “deep in her wood” bears connotations :) ………….
Im grateful to be worthy of your praise
-CIU

Love the gothic realm, time to put on a little ripped black dress, some knee high boots with heels, dark around the eyes, silver pentagram necklace and ear rings... and dance on the graves... I find a type of peace in graveyards you don't get anywhere else, but more importantly I love trying to wake the dead. (did get bit by a spider once but it was worth it.) I had wondered about the 1... I am glad to hear that it denotes a series. Darkshaded colours are the best... and of course the inappropriate. :p * fistpump *. Yeah I definitely got the 'deep in her wood'. lol

Yor a woman after my own bad hart - I would devour you in seconds!
if you like graveyards, then you might like Succubus Waltz
what kind of spider bit you?
I had a funnel-web spider on my shoulder once
- it was a good morning greeting I'll never forget!