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The Day
I guess you just get over it all
You get over all the hurt
You get over all the hope
You just become nothing
And at the same time
You become something
You never thought you'd be
You get over all the hurt
You get over all the hope
You just become nothing
And at the same time
You become something
You never thought you'd be
Published 2nd Jun 2022
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2nd Jun 2022 7:46am
Dear S,
I’m not sure I ever got over any of the hurt I’ve experienced. Mine has morphed into anger and supreme disappointment. As for becoming something I never thought I’d be has turned out way better than I could have imagined. I think this poem has succinctly put into perspective how life has its own agenda. Great write. H🌷
I’m not sure I ever got over any of the hurt I’ve experienced. Mine has morphed into anger and supreme disappointment. As for becoming something I never thought I’d be has turned out way better than I could have imagined. I think this poem has succinctly put into perspective how life has its own agenda. Great write. H🌷
2nd Jun 2022 12:08pm
`Anger and Supreme Disappointment' really stuck out.
You also reminded me of the saying 'you make plans and then life happens' I guess this applies to turning out different from expected.
You also reminded me of the saying 'you make plans and then life happens' I guess this applies to turning out different from expected.
2nd Jun 2022 7:52am
