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Sol
The sun burns on the horizon
surrounded by a patchwork rainbow
of pinks and purples and clouds
a beacon at the end of the day
a blazing farewell gesture
a herald of the stars and moon
waiting for the golden orb
to drop into the sea
and reappear tomorrow morning
a fire in the sky to greet the day
surrounded by a patchwork rainbow
of pinks and purples and clouds
a beacon at the end of the day
a blazing farewell gesture
a herald of the stars and moon
waiting for the golden orb
to drop into the sea
and reappear tomorrow morning
a fire in the sky to greet the day
Published 2nd Jun 2022
Author's Note
For Missy's Orange Is The Colour comp
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2nd Jun 2022 7:09am
The Sun is a ball of fiery beauty to me. I LOVE my Sun. May you have luck in the comp! <3
2nd Jun 2022 7:11am
2nd Jun 2022 7:49am
Dear I,
I really enjoyed the fantastic imagery you’ve described. It just made me feel calm and awed by nature. I wish you all the best in the comp. H🌷
I really enjoyed the fantastic imagery you’ve described. It just made me feel calm and awed by nature. I wish you all the best in the comp. H🌷
2nd Jun 2022 8:06am
There might be a misalignment with a sun worshipping kind.
Have you ever gazed directly at the dawn sunrise or the dusks sunset?
Have you ever gazed directly at the dawn sunrise or the dusks sunset?
2nd Jun 2022 12:42pm
