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Fragments of Scarlet
The musk of dusk
Settles
Over me
In frames of willow
&
Unnamed sorrow
As the world
Spins
In surreal
Revolutions
&
Spans
Of heart imparted
Soul
Falling frozen in
Fragments
Of
Time’s sands
Published 1st Jun 2022
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1st Jun 2022 6:22pm
Dear CO,
I enjoyed the visual of this poem. It felt like a piece of each day I think to myself how I’m feeling one minute and the very next is completely different but I’m still me. Just bits and pieces of me are exposed to the universe to take on and no one around me is the wiser. They just still think I am what they’ve decided I am by how I look or what I want them to know. It’s a pretty poem with so many ways to work it in one’s mind. H 🌷
I enjoyed the visual of this poem. It felt like a piece of each day I think to myself how I’m feeling one minute and the very next is completely different but I’m still me. Just bits and pieces of me are exposed to the universe to take on and no one around me is the wiser. They just still think I am what they’ve decided I am by how I look or what I want them to know. It’s a pretty poem with so many ways to work it in one’s mind. H 🌷
2nd Jun 2022 2:16am
Those are very beautiful thoughts H...
I very much appreciate you sharing
them with me...
I very much appreciate you sharing
them with me...
1st Jun 2022 7:01pm
2nd Jun 2022 2:18am
Thank you LilD...
That was an element of
the initial inspiration...
I am very pleased that
it had that effect on your perception...
That was an element of
the initial inspiration...
I am very pleased that
it had that effect on your perception...
