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Senryu
Beguiling
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Beguiling
she was a red rose
wilder amongst streams of white
how could i resist
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published
30th May 2022
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Re. Beguiling
LilDragonFly
30th May 2022 11:15pm
Nice crisp brevity... vivid with color...
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SweetKittyCat5
30th May 2022 11:49pm
Very softy composed in the brevity, my handsome moonbeam
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Betty
31st May 2022 2:27am
This was a delicate little piece. I enjoyed the conceit, the picture, of a single red rose in a field of white roses. It speaks volume in the color and placement, and I totally dug it. Good stuff
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Tallen
(earth_empath)
31st May 2022 5:34pm
indeed
how could anyone resist?
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2022 7:51am
1st Jun 2022 1:40am
I love the irresistibility!! ;)
🌹-💙
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2022 3:43pm
how could you resist? I don't think anyone could.
I love the image you have hear. That single red in a sea of white. There is nowhere else to look. Very clever.
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