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Knockin' (Fanning The Flames........)
"Mama, take this badge off me
I can't use it anymore
It's way too dark, too dark for me to see
I feel like I'm knockin' on heaven's door"
Hello Heaven, I think I heard your call
You say "Yes is the answer"
So I guess the handwriting is on the wall
The answer's in the wind. You need not say anymore......
Now, I've come to rap upon "ur" beautiful backdoor.
I stand before you , naked. Tell me what do you see?
Perhaps a perfect dark, chocolate specimen of a man standing there before thee......
...so please fly, Phoenix fly; take this fine cock into gentle hands
Guide me to your pleasure-let *me* be your back door man.
Speak to my heart, you need every inch that I have to give
You want to feel me inside your azz
Like you need breathe to live
Please baby please, stroke and caress the *hardness*
That I lay here in your soft hands
Temper the tool that shall pop your lock
Yes I'm your back door man.
Can my big hands part your derriere? Can I lick you? that tight-fit restriction with my tongue? Squeeze your swollen nipples till your core is wet.................
.......can I press your body? Lick you with my muscular tongue
down your spine, can I lick warmly the most sensitive part of your sexy azz neck?
Maybe my fingers just might "prime" your tight asshole open
Or maybe, just maybe-I'll let the "pussy monster" spread those cheeks. Mmmmm, that's exactly what I'm hoping.
(I want to make you loose ur mind)
.....as I take you strongly, deeply from behind.
Baby, you know that you know that I definitely can.
Let me make you mine. Make me your personal back door man.....
.....I've got the master key that fits perfectly, your lock.
I'll rock your body so damned hard, you'll be in a deep state of shock.
I do know what you need now, let me climb aboard and ride, ride, ride........
Smokey said (Baby let's cruise away from here
Don't be confused-the way is clear)
Let the music take your mind !
"Toot it and Boot it girl." Let me have that sweet chocolate one more time.....
My mind takes me to naughty places
"Dirty Sanchez', "Tea Baggin'"
Things that make ur body swing from my dick
like a pendulum to and fro
Girl you make it so......
.......so very hard to get up and go.
Have mercy, you have me so damned hard; so damned close
Bend over, close your eyes and open wide
Slowly, firmly I enter the door
Can you feel all this........slipin' and slidin'
....inside? I want you to "make me cum!"
Leave me not able to move, spent and "Comfortably Numb"
Naked on the killing floor. Back lewdly bent, wanting to feel
more and more. Ur sphincter's ring just about to pop
Pleasure so sensual, so intense, I ain't ever gonna' stop......
.........till u feel me cummin' deep and so damned hot inside
and ur azz is standing open wide
....and you're mine right there
feeling so nice; wanting so much more
standin' up in it baby
Knockin' on your beautiful, inviting, enticing
back door.
Randy sang it for me best.... "Knock, knock knocking on Heaven's door
Knock, knock knocking on Heaven's door......
I can't use it anymore
It's way too dark, too dark for me to see
I feel like I'm knockin' on heaven's door"
Hello Heaven, I think I heard your call
You say "Yes is the answer"
So I guess the handwriting is on the wall
The answer's in the wind. You need not say anymore......
Now, I've come to rap upon "ur" beautiful backdoor.
I stand before you , naked. Tell me what do you see?
Perhaps a perfect dark, chocolate specimen of a man standing there before thee......
...so please fly, Phoenix fly; take this fine cock into gentle hands
Guide me to your pleasure-let *me* be your back door man.
Speak to my heart, you need every inch that I have to give
You want to feel me inside your azz
Like you need breathe to live
Please baby please, stroke and caress the *hardness*
That I lay here in your soft hands
Temper the tool that shall pop your lock
Yes I'm your back door man.
Can my big hands part your derriere? Can I lick you? that tight-fit restriction with my tongue? Squeeze your swollen nipples till your core is wet.................
.......can I press your body? Lick you with my muscular tongue
down your spine, can I lick warmly the most sensitive part of your sexy azz neck?
Maybe my fingers just might "prime" your tight asshole open
Or maybe, just maybe-I'll let the "pussy monster" spread those cheeks. Mmmmm, that's exactly what I'm hoping.
(I want to make you loose ur mind)
.....as I take you strongly, deeply from behind.
Baby, you know that you know that I definitely can.
Let me make you mine. Make me your personal back door man.....
.....I've got the master key that fits perfectly, your lock.
I'll rock your body so damned hard, you'll be in a deep state of shock.
I do know what you need now, let me climb aboard and ride, ride, ride........
Smokey said (Baby let's cruise away from here
Don't be confused-the way is clear)
Let the music take your mind !
"Toot it and Boot it girl." Let me have that sweet chocolate one more time.....
My mind takes me to naughty places
"Dirty Sanchez', "Tea Baggin'"
Things that make ur body swing from my dick
like a pendulum to and fro
Girl you make it so......
.......so very hard to get up and go.
Have mercy, you have me so damned hard; so damned close
Bend over, close your eyes and open wide
Slowly, firmly I enter the door
Can you feel all this........slipin' and slidin'
....inside? I want you to "make me cum!"
Leave me not able to move, spent and "Comfortably Numb"
Naked on the killing floor. Back lewdly bent, wanting to feel
more and more. Ur sphincter's ring just about to pop
Pleasure so sensual, so intense, I ain't ever gonna' stop......
.........till u feel me cummin' deep and so damned hot inside
and ur azz is standing open wide
....and you're mine right there
feeling so nice; wanting so much more
standin' up in it baby
Knockin' on your beautiful, inviting, enticing
back door.
Randy sang it for me best.... "Knock, knock knocking on Heaven's door
Knock, knock knocking on Heaven's door......
Published 18th Mar 2012
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18th Mar 2012 2:33am
(and I'm locked in the most devlish grin >: ) added a few revisions and a image : )
23rd Mar 2012 2:53am
Mmm I'm smiling devilish
Wishing you would grant me one wish
Let me be the woman in your master piece
Wishing you would grant me one wish
Let me be the woman in your master piece
23rd Apr 2012 4:21am
If you would have told me Dylan could be used like this, I would have laugh myself silly! That back door brings back the blues of course. See Mr.Songwriter himself in there,(Smokey) and a much more pleasant "Comfortably Numb" then what Roger Waters originally proposed. Stellar poem here!
