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Booty Hug
I love my girl's hips
With my fingers and lips
Wrap my arms round her waist
With my chest near that "place"
Maybe later I'll taste
For now,
just share her space
Her thighs fill my hands
Heat rises
up towards my face
Published 29th May 2022
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Hi FatBoy,how are you?
I enjoyed this pen,but felt like I wanted 2 read more.
Would u consider extending this?
Or,maybe that's the whole point.
Leave the reader wanting more!
Take care.
X
I enjoyed this pen,but felt like I wanted 2 read more.
Would u consider extending this?
Or,maybe that's the whole point.
Leave the reader wanting more!
Take care.
X
30th May 2022 12:00pm
Thought about stretching it
Couldn't find a way to do it without totally changing it
However, if you wish to do a version of your own, feel free
I have taken inspiration from, and liberties with, rewrites of ink from poets who publish pieces that moved me
I'm glad that you liked it
Enjoy yourself
Couldn't find a way to do it without totally changing it
However, if you wish to do a version of your own, feel free
I have taken inspiration from, and liberties with, rewrites of ink from poets who publish pieces that moved me
I'm glad that you liked it
Enjoy yourself
30th May 2022 5:35pm
Hi FatBoy,how u doing?
Hope well?
I think that "you" will be the one 2 add extra richness 2 your own pen.
I'd be delighted 2 hear your extension.
Regardless if u extend or not.
The piece is still tight.
Its a brilliant pen.
Take care.
X
Hope well?
I think that "you" will be the one 2 add extra richness 2 your own pen.
I'd be delighted 2 hear your extension.
Regardless if u extend or not.
The piece is still tight.
Its a brilliant pen.
Take care.
X
29th May 2022 12:43pm
24th Jun 2022 10:05pm
3rd Aug 2022 6:11am
Very authentic and visual. I especially like how you left the rest up to the pervert/ reader's imagination!! Haha. Much respect, bro!! Peace.
