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A Love Unknown
They say a love unknown is a love that is gone
But a love gone is a love that was once known
A bond that started as nothing but has grown
A love that many people wish they can clone
It wasn't pretend I really did give my heart to you
Even after what we been through
For you there wasn't nothing I wouldn't do
When they seen me they seen you
I was always the wood but you was my glue
I NEVER imagined us being here
I thought the love we shared was rare
I saw forever with you
Now I don't know if that was was true
Looking up to the sky, different shades of blue
Praying that love brings me back to you
But a love gone is a love that was once known
A bond that started as nothing but has grown
A love that many people wish they can clone
It wasn't pretend I really did give my heart to you
Even after what we been through
For you there wasn't nothing I wouldn't do
When they seen me they seen you
I was always the wood but you was my glue
I NEVER imagined us being here
I thought the love we shared was rare
I saw forever with you
Now I don't know if that was was true
Looking up to the sky, different shades of blue
Praying that love brings me back to you
Published 22nd May 2022
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22nd May 2022 10:01pm
A very beautiful and wonderful piece so thought provoking straight from the truth of the mind and heart and spiritual soul 🙏👊🦋
19th Aug 2022 5:45pm
It has such an innocent and pure tone even if it's love that is beyond platonic.
5th Dec 2022 8:02am
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
I’m a bit late maybe, but I want to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your poem. Reading that you are happy would have been better of course….
A bit romantic and straight from the heart is a bit looked down on, I guess. But before the last line I thought it read like a prayer. Beautiful. And thank you for sharing.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
I’m a bit late maybe, but I want to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your poem. Reading that you are happy would have been better of course….
A bit romantic and straight from the heart is a bit looked down on, I guess. But before the last line I thought it read like a prayer. Beautiful. And thank you for sharing.
Kind regards, Gus
29th Nov 2023 7:36am
