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- G R E E D -
Written by
RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
Published 18th May 2022
Author's Note
Made For the Greed Comp. Hosted by The Webmiss
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12257
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12257
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Re. - G R E E D -
18th May 2022 12:54pm
Re: Re. - G R E E D -
20th May 2022 1:13pm
hello
thank you for your comment. yes agreed we could do without greed.
;)
Al
thank you for your comment. yes agreed we could do without greed.
;)
Al
Re. - G R E E D -
18th May 2022 1:12pm
Love, love, love it! The picture is amazing, too! Best of luck in the comp!
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20th May 2022 1:14pm
Re. - G R E E D -
Anonymous
18th May 2022 9:38pm
… I feel like this should have been a Parlotones lyric. You should send Kahn that shit for him to write down. 😉
Best of luck in the comp!
-M
Best of luck in the comp!
-M
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Re: Re. - G R E E D -
20th May 2022 1:15pm
hello
yeah.. money smoney who is your god? haha!
thank you for popping in
good luck to you too
;)
Al
yeah.. money smoney who is your god? haha!
thank you for popping in
good luck to you too
;)
Al
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Anonymous
19th May 2022 9:19am
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Re: Re. - G R E E D -
20th May 2022 1:16pm
hello
thanks for popping in and putting your comment words here.
appreciate your words
;)
Al
thanks for popping in and putting your comment words here.
appreciate your words
;)
Al
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
22nd May 2022 5:19am
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Re: Re. - G R E E D -
23rd May 2022 9:46am
could it be the syllable count in that line, that causes a tremor?
thanks for eyes and voice on it, good to see you are around.
Al
thanks for eyes and voice on it, good to see you are around.
Al
Re. - G R E E D -
23rd May 2022 2:16pm
This is a work of art, the image so perfectly enhances and amplifies the message. Some words and thoughts are vinegar. Fortunately we can choose to add some oil and make a salad. Best of luck in the competition Alistair. :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 19th Feb 2023 9:45pm
24th May 2022 3:52pm
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Re. - G R E E D -
1st Jun 2022 10:20pm
Re. - G R E E D -
20th Dec 2022 4:03pm
Excellent visual and message. Though the limit is 50 words, the brevity in this really drives it to the point.
Great entry.
Great entry.
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