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- G R E E D -

Written by
RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
Published 18th May 2022
Author's Note
Made For the Greed Comp. Hosted by The Webmiss
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12257
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12257
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18th May 2022 12:54pm
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20th May 2022 1:13pm
hello
thank you for your comment. yes agreed we could do without greed.
;)
Al
thank you for your comment. yes agreed we could do without greed.
;)
Al
Re. - G R E E D -
18th May 2022 1:12pm
Love, love, love it! The picture is amazing, too! Best of luck in the comp!
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20th May 2022 1:14pm
Re. - G R E E D -
18th May 2022 9:38pm
… I feel like this should have been a Parlotones lyric. You should send Kahn that shit for him to write down. 😉
Best of luck in the comp!
-M
Best of luck in the comp!
-M
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Re: Re. - G R E E D -
20th May 2022 1:15pm
hello
yeah.. money smoney who is your god? haha!
thank you for popping in
good luck to you too
;)
Al
yeah.. money smoney who is your god? haha!
thank you for popping in
good luck to you too
;)
Al
Re. - G R E E D -
19th May 2022 9:19am
Hey Al this certainly strikes a cord,
Greed is one of my pet peeves, the other being ignorance.
Thanks for sharing,
Good luck for the competition.
Regards
S-m-sawyer
Greed is one of my pet peeves, the other being ignorance.
Thanks for sharing,
Good luck for the competition.
Regards
S-m-sawyer
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Re: Re. - G R E E D -
20th May 2022 1:16pm
hello
thanks for popping in and putting your comment words here.
appreciate your words
;)
Al
thanks for popping in and putting your comment words here.
appreciate your words
;)
Al
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Anonymous
22nd May 2022 5:19am
I agree 100%. Though there's something about that last line that bothers me. (for) the love of money. I don't know why. I don't know how to explain it. But, anyway.

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23rd May 2022 9:46am
could it be the syllable count in that line, that causes a tremor?
thanks for eyes and voice on it, good to see you are around.
Al
thanks for eyes and voice on it, good to see you are around.
Al
Re. - G R E E D -
23rd May 2022 2:16pm
This is a work of art, the image so perfectly enhances and amplifies the message. Some words and thoughts are vinegar. Fortunately we can choose to add some oil and make a salad. Best of luck in the competition Alistair. :)
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Anonymous
24th May 2022 3:52pm
Too true, though greed refuses banishment, and if it can be paired with ambition, it might actually have beneficial uses.
But humanity throughout history has not generally shown itself capable of sustained restraint.
But humanity throughout history has not generally shown itself capable of sustained restraint.

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1st Jun 2022 10:20pm