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White Light & Awe
Chain links
Sink
Into suns setting
In
Blood letting
Connecting one night
To the next
Night
One write
To
The next
Write
Ink black
Into
White
Page
In a black
Brick
Road to white
Light
&
Awe
Published 16th May 2022
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16th May 2022 3:06pm
Dear CO,
Have to say I found this poem leading…in the sense it led me to think how everything is linked together even when it seems disconnected. One event leads to the next which in turn creates decisions that affect outcomes. I like how the picture lends itself to roads of thought. Great write. H🌷
Have to say I found this poem leading…in the sense it led me to think how everything is linked together even when it seems disconnected. One event leads to the next which in turn creates decisions that affect outcomes. I like how the picture lends itself to roads of thought. Great write. H🌷
16th May 2022 9:27pm
17th May 2022 5:31am
I love how this all links together.
Each stanza connecting to the next and the next.
Following each other just like the title of this poem.
I also love the picture you chose for this.
My dad was a brick layer and in a weird way he
just popped in my mind when reading so thank you
for that .
Each stanza connecting to the next and the next.
Following each other just like the title of this poem.
I also love the picture you chose for this.
My dad was a brick layer and in a weird way he
just popped in my mind when reading so thank you
for that .
17th May 2022 5:41am
Real cool A!!
You always connect with
words in such magical ways...
Tis wonderful
Blessings
On
Blessings
You always connect with
words in such magical ways...
Tis wonderful
Blessings
On
Blessings
