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The Visit
She knocks on the door and it opens. He says to her "Come in"
Then He takes her in His arms, slaps her ass , and gives her a devilish grin
She says, "So tell me Master, What's on the agenda tonight?"
He replies, "I'll tell you just as soon as I tie you up good and tight"
So He leads her to His bedroom where everything is laid out and ready
To administer hours of pain and pleasure slow, deep, and steady
He gently removes her blouse, releasing her plump breasts
Her heart beating so fast it might burst out of her chest
Next He slides her skirt down her legs and it drops to her feet
Her pussy pulsating and wet, ready for Him to eat
He slides His hands into her panties removing them nice and slow
Every inch of her body on fire as she trembles head to toe
He takes her by her hands and leads her to His bed
He says,"Lay down and spread your legs Your Master needs to be fed"
She obeys without a moments hesitation and He begins to drink
From the fountain erupting from her pussy so warm, juicy, and pink
When He has had His fill, He stops and licks His lips
Staring at her still gasping and moaning as cum from her pussy drips
He says, " I'm sorry baby do you need something to quench your thirst?"
"How rude of me to take care of myself before offering you something first"
So He takes her head in His hands as she opens her mouth wide
He inserts His cock as her lips and tongue slowly begin to glide
He fucks her mouth with her head in His hands until He fills it up with cum
She swallows then looks at Him and says, "I'll have another with a shot of Rum"
He lays her on her stomach and securely ties her feet and hands
He can hear her breathing louder while at the foot of the bed He stands
She knows whats coming next as she hears the snapping of His leather
He starts by barely touching her skin lightly like a feather
Then she feels the sting as He gets into the lashings
Nipples hard and cum from her pussy starts flowing and splashing
He plunges His big hard cock so very deep inside of her
She arches her back and claws at the cover and begins to loudly purr
He feels so good , INCREDIBLE, for her there is ONLY Him
And she will be at His beckon call, Over and over again
Then He takes her in His arms, slaps her ass , and gives her a devilish grin
She says, "So tell me Master, What's on the agenda tonight?"
He replies, "I'll tell you just as soon as I tie you up good and tight"
So He leads her to His bedroom where everything is laid out and ready
To administer hours of pain and pleasure slow, deep, and steady
He gently removes her blouse, releasing her plump breasts
Her heart beating so fast it might burst out of her chest
Next He slides her skirt down her legs and it drops to her feet
Her pussy pulsating and wet, ready for Him to eat
He slides His hands into her panties removing them nice and slow
Every inch of her body on fire as she trembles head to toe
He takes her by her hands and leads her to His bed
He says,"Lay down and spread your legs Your Master needs to be fed"
She obeys without a moments hesitation and He begins to drink
From the fountain erupting from her pussy so warm, juicy, and pink
When He has had His fill, He stops and licks His lips
Staring at her still gasping and moaning as cum from her pussy drips
He says, " I'm sorry baby do you need something to quench your thirst?"
"How rude of me to take care of myself before offering you something first"
So He takes her head in His hands as she opens her mouth wide
He inserts His cock as her lips and tongue slowly begin to glide
He fucks her mouth with her head in His hands until He fills it up with cum
She swallows then looks at Him and says, "I'll have another with a shot of Rum"
He lays her on her stomach and securely ties her feet and hands
He can hear her breathing louder while at the foot of the bed He stands
She knows whats coming next as she hears the snapping of His leather
He starts by barely touching her skin lightly like a feather
Then she feels the sting as He gets into the lashings
Nipples hard and cum from her pussy starts flowing and splashing
He plunges His big hard cock so very deep inside of her
She arches her back and claws at the cover and begins to loudly purr
He feels so good , INCREDIBLE, for her there is ONLY Him
And she will be at His beckon call, Over and over again
Published 16th May 2022
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16th May 2022 1:45am
17th May 2022 3:46am
16th May 2022 6:59am
I can see the cum flow from your cunt
It's the kind of a picture I want
I am feeling the heat
As you're taking my meat
My cock is enjoying the hunt
Great poem to read. however there were places I had to struggle with the rhythm method (pun intended)
It's the kind of a picture I want
I am feeling the heat
As you're taking my meat
My cock is enjoying the hunt
Great poem to read. however there were places I had to struggle with the rhythm method (pun intended)
17th May 2022 3:47am
16th May 2022 9:06am
The Visit - by Ebpsnow – modified by Eightmore
She knocks on the door and it opens. He says to her "Come right on in in"
Then He takes her, in hand, with his strong arms, slaps her ass with a devilish grin
She says, "So tell me my Master, What is on your agenda tonight?"
He replies, "I'll tell you about it, as soon as you're tied good and tight"
He leads her off to His bedroom, where everything's laid out and ready
Where hours of pain and of pleasure, he'll administer slow, deep, and steady
He gently removes her silk blouse, thus releasing her plump heavy breasts
Her heart's beating faster and faster. It might just burst out of her chest
He slides her skirt down to her ankles and looks as it drops to her feet
Her wet pussy's pulsing and ready. He lowers his head there to eat
He slides his hands in her panties, removing them real nice and slow
Every inch of her body's on fire, she trembles from her head to toe
He takes both her hands in his hands, and then leads her off to his bed
He says,"Lay down, and spread your legs wide, your Master has needs to be fed"
She obeys without hesitation, He begins to sup and to drink
A fountain erupts from her pussy, that's so warm, and so juicy, and pink
After she has climaxed from his antics, he stops and he's licking his lips
He stares at her, gasping and moaning as the sweet cum, from her pussy, drips
" I'm so terribly sorry my darling, do you need a warm drink for your thirst?"
"How rude I was, to take care of myself, before I offered your mouth something first"
He guides her head down to his hardness, and she opens her mouth big and wide
She takes his cock, as it's offered, and her lips and her tongue slowly glide
He fucks her warm mouth, with her head in His hands, until He has filled it with cum
She swallows it all, looks at Him and she says, "I'll have another with a straight shot of Rum"
He lays her down on her stomach, ties securely, her feet and her hands
He can hear her breath become louder, from the foot of he bed where he stands
She hears the snapping of leather. He begins, barely touching her skin
Her pussy starts flowing with pleasure, nipples hard as he whips her again
He plunges His hard cock inside her. She arches her back and she claws
They're consenting adults who are playing, a game that is breaking no laws
His dick's dipping deep down inside her, feels so good, an INCREDIBLE sin.
When it's over she'll be at his beck and call and they'll do it again and again
I could not resist playing with your poem that I love so much. Hope you don't mind
She knocks on the door and it opens. He says to her "Come right on in in"
Then He takes her, in hand, with his strong arms, slaps her ass with a devilish grin
She says, "So tell me my Master, What is on your agenda tonight?"
He replies, "I'll tell you about it, as soon as you're tied good and tight"
He leads her off to His bedroom, where everything's laid out and ready
Where hours of pain and of pleasure, he'll administer slow, deep, and steady
He gently removes her silk blouse, thus releasing her plump heavy breasts
Her heart's beating faster and faster. It might just burst out of her chest
He slides her skirt down to her ankles and looks as it drops to her feet
Her wet pussy's pulsing and ready. He lowers his head there to eat
He slides his hands in her panties, removing them real nice and slow
Every inch of her body's on fire, she trembles from her head to toe
He takes both her hands in his hands, and then leads her off to his bed
He says,"Lay down, and spread your legs wide, your Master has needs to be fed"
She obeys without hesitation, He begins to sup and to drink
A fountain erupts from her pussy, that's so warm, and so juicy, and pink
After she has climaxed from his antics, he stops and he's licking his lips
He stares at her, gasping and moaning as the sweet cum, from her pussy, drips
" I'm so terribly sorry my darling, do you need a warm drink for your thirst?"
"How rude I was, to take care of myself, before I offered your mouth something first"
He guides her head down to his hardness, and she opens her mouth big and wide
She takes his cock, as it's offered, and her lips and her tongue slowly glide
He fucks her warm mouth, with her head in His hands, until He has filled it with cum
She swallows it all, looks at Him and she says, "I'll have another with a straight shot of Rum"
He lays her down on her stomach, ties securely, her feet and her hands
He can hear her breath become louder, from the foot of he bed where he stands
She hears the snapping of leather. He begins, barely touching her skin
Her pussy starts flowing with pleasure, nipples hard as he whips her again
He plunges His hard cock inside her. She arches her back and she claws
They're consenting adults who are playing, a game that is breaking no laws
His dick's dipping deep down inside her, feels so good, an INCREDIBLE sin.
When it's over she'll be at his beck and call and they'll do it again and again
I could not resist playing with your poem that I love so much. Hope you don't mind
17th May 2022 3:48am
17th May 2022 11:27am
16th May 2022 3:48pm
17th May 2022 3:49am
23rd May 2022 3:54pm
You have a beautiful poetic way of telling an erotic story. I love your three poems. You must be great lover and woman with passion. Waiting to read more.
Kisses and hugs,
KS
Kisses and hugs,
KS
23rd May 2022 6:25pm
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