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twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
To be known, to be seen
colored in multifaceted hues
all my purple's and black
-those fine traces-
yellow melding truth of glory
light slow..ly fading
twisting burnt-out orangey
how illumination succumbs
from it's sort of solar powered fate
bound, forever cherished
to always beautifully permeate
prismatic tendrils reaching
from deep inside, (out)
tears through majestic teaching
all pinpoint sparkle—
shimmers foretold promise;
Flares of a pure ebony
rainbow-like spray
rebirth each night's brilliant darkness
{O' marvel, nature's spectacle}
in phantasmagoric display.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 15th May 2022
Author's Note
For Rianne's Natural Images Series comp
Pic is from the comp, used as our inspiration
©Blu2022
Redux - an edited/updated version from a poem originally published March '21
Pic is from the comp, used as our inspiration
©Blu2022
Redux - an edited/updated version from a poem originally published March '21
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
15th May 2022 9:46pm
Absolutely beautiful B
Mesmerising !!
The picture too.
I hope you're well
S-m-sawyer-🏅-✨️
Mesmerising !!
The picture too.
I hope you're well
S-m-sawyer-🏅-✨️
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
I'm wonderful today, thanks so much for asking, Sawyer -x
Ohh my... what a lovely comment, dear new friend!
I'm so very glad you enjoyed reading and found some beauty here....I'm grateful for the list add, too-🙏
The pic was assigned per the competition that this poem is for, so I'm delighted they worked in unison.
I'm appreciative of your visit and for leaving me your thoughts... it's meaningful.
Warmest regards,
🌹-🌇
B
Ohh my... what a lovely comment, dear new friend!
I'm so very glad you enjoyed reading and found some beauty here....I'm grateful for the list add, too-🙏
The pic was assigned per the competition that this poem is for, so I'm delighted they worked in unison.
I'm appreciative of your visit and for leaving me your thoughts... it's meaningful.
Warmest regards,
🌹-🌇
B
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
15th May 2022 10:19pm
Go girl another amazing write, absolutely loved this piece, go TEAM BLUE
Great job
Love and light
Ron xx
Great job
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
Dawww... I felt that comment like a big 'ol hug!!
Thanks for the supportive encouragement, dear Ron! I'm thrilled that you found this one worthy, I couldn't ask for a better teammate!! Yesss!!
Speaking of teams.. The Tampa Bay Lightning won the first round of the Stanley Cup playoffs (they're going for a third straight Stanley Cup win!) last night against the Toronto Maple Leaves, in game freaking 7!!! It was a total nail bitter up to the very end. Now we go on the play the Florida Panthers, which have been the bane of The Tampa Bay Lightning's existence, for the whole regular season because that team has been so good! It's going to be a wild series against them.... I'll keep you posted!! 🤞🏻
🏒 ⚡💙⚡🏒
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹 - B
x
Thanks for the supportive encouragement, dear Ron! I'm thrilled that you found this one worthy, I couldn't ask for a better teammate!! Yesss!!
Speaking of teams.. The Tampa Bay Lightning won the first round of the Stanley Cup playoffs (they're going for a third straight Stanley Cup win!) last night against the Toronto Maple Leaves, in game freaking 7!!! It was a total nail bitter up to the very end. Now we go on the play the Florida Panthers, which have been the bane of The Tampa Bay Lightning's existence, for the whole regular season because that team has been so good! It's going to be a wild series against them.... I'll keep you posted!! 🤞🏻
🏒 ⚡💙⚡🏒
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹 - B
x
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
15th May 2022 10:43pm
I do love dawn. Coffee. The embers still warm from the previous night's ritual.
But, sunset. Relinquishing the light. Darkness by design. The green of morning awaiting the purple of night.
Cold coffee. The last of yesterday. A shoulder. A neck. The end of all horizons. Sunset. On purpose.
But, sunset. Relinquishing the light. Darkness by design. The green of morning awaiting the purple of night.
Cold coffee. The last of yesterday. A shoulder. A neck. The end of all horizons. Sunset. On purpose.
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
*I'm gonna scooch in there.. climb on up and watch the sun set... I swear I can almost 'hear' the moment it dips past the skyline .... ;)
I love them both,... it's often sunrise for me as well. .. However, I absolutely LOVE those orangie pink moments Florida has in the evening... they sometimes will turn to this rich purple before darkness takes over... I guess I'm a sucker for that... and of course.. the neck and shoulder , too!!
😏☺️
Thank you for sharing with me, RT ... loved it.
🌹 - 💙
B
I love them both,... it's often sunrise for me as well. .. However, I absolutely LOVE those orangie pink moments Florida has in the evening... they sometimes will turn to this rich purple before darkness takes over... I guess I'm a sucker for that... and of course.. the neck and shoulder , too!!
😏☺️
Thank you for sharing with me, RT ... loved it.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
18th May 2022 5:50am
Marshmallows....sticky lips and fingers...
The crisp outside, that hot, melted gooeyness....licking the stick and taking on another...dropping it in the fire and watching it madly burn into volcanic ash....
Talking all night about God, the universe, and other related subjects...dawn, the beach, breakfast, sleeplessness...coffee...a shower....a nap that lasts until evening....exhausted in the best possible ways...
Sticky neck....and sunburned shoulders...
The crisp outside, that hot, melted gooeyness....licking the stick and taking on another...dropping it in the fire and watching it madly burn into volcanic ash....
Talking all night about God, the universe, and other related subjects...dawn, the beach, breakfast, sleeplessness...coffee...a shower....a nap that lasts until evening....exhausted in the best possible ways...
Sticky neck....and sunburned shoulders...
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Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
The beauty of watching a sunset or sunrise with you. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman. You got my vote.
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 00:42am
There's so much natural beauty to wash over the senses, twilight's ability to capture an ethereal moment, being a total fav. Thanks for your always faithful readership and the sweet invitation Francisco...
🌹 - 🌇
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Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 00:51am
The sky is an endless beauty that I never tire of seeing or reading about. Thanks for sharing your views. <3 ly
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
I couldn't agree more!
Thank you for the generous list add and your thoughtful comments, it's that type of kindness that I wholly enjoy and value.
The plethora of natural wonder is limitless, as are the potential for poems that reflect and express that awe.
I look forward to reading you too, in the days ahead.
Please don't be a stranger, it was a pleasure 🦋
🌹 - B
Thank you for the generous list add and your thoughtful comments, it's that type of kindness that I wholly enjoy and value.
The plethora of natural wonder is limitless, as are the potential for poems that reflect and express that awe.
I look forward to reading you too, in the days ahead.
Please don't be a stranger, it was a pleasure 🦋
🌹 - B
Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 6:02am
Okay will do, thank you too. Names not ly though. lol sorry I put it behind the heart but that didn't work well did it? Nope. <3ly = lovely. See you around DU. :)
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 6:53am
lol... Silly blue that I am.... fixed it.
Thank you for letting me know.
🌹 - 💙
Thank you for letting me know.
🌹 - 💙
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 5:56am
Kinda cool reading this after watching the eclipse show several minutes ago. Coincidence perhaps, but ironic in the fate of it. They fit together well.
If you're still aspiring to be a good poet, you can rest. Because you're there.
ps. Don't ever diminish your light. Shine. If someone can't take it, they can turn their own head.
pss. I have RayBans. Bring it!
If you're still aspiring to be a good poet, you can rest. Because you're there.
ps. Don't ever diminish your light. Shine. If someone can't take it, they can turn their own head.
pss. I have RayBans. Bring it!
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 4:11pm
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 8:17am
Killer killer title...
I like the idea of nature as phantasmagoria...
That is such a wonderful way
to encapsulate the convergences of chaos and order...
This piece delves so deeply through
the surface and into the depths...
Capturing both these aspects...
Creating such a cool effect of movement...
And the splashes of rhyme...
:)))
Wonderful work B...
I like the idea of nature as phantasmagoria...
That is such a wonderful way
to encapsulate the convergences of chaos and order...
This piece delves so deeply through
the surface and into the depths...
Capturing both these aspects...
Creating such a cool effect of movement...
And the splashes of rhyme...
:)))
Wonderful work B...
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
16th May 2022 4:34pm
I love to splash around B in rhyme... as it's an awesome learning tool for me!! (thanks for noticing!)
I was all smiles you dug the title... Yessss!! 👍🏻
I knew you would!!.. lol...
Like mind's and all.
It's those different aspects that fluttered and flirted with me that I hoped would possibly come across, I'm stoked you picked up on it!! .. lovely lovely seeing you this morning!!
🌹-🌇
x
I was all smiles you dug the title... Yessss!! 👍🏻
I knew you would!!.. lol...
Like mind's and all.
It's those different aspects that fluttered and flirted with me that I hoped would possibly come across, I'm stoked you picked up on it!! .. lovely lovely seeing you this morning!!
🌹-🌇
x
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
17th May 2022 1:30am
Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
17th May 2022 1:33am
Awww... thanks, H
That's such a lovely comment, I'm so delighted you thought so!
I appreciate you stopping by,
it's always a pleasure ✨
-B
That's such a lovely comment, I'm so delighted you thought so!
I appreciate you stopping by,
it's always a pleasure ✨
-B
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
1st Jun 2022 6:54am
Amazingly captured, love the title. I read this 3 times before commenting, wow Blue. Your words can mesmerize and move a soul.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
1st Jun 2022 7:00am
Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
27th Jun 2022 8:49pm
What I always enjoy about these comps is that for the same visual, all poets have a different interpretation, some more in depth than others. You have an excellent vocabulary which weaves amazing creations. Thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
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Re: Re. twilight n' twisted phantasmagoric.
27th Jun 2022 9:11pm
Thanks Walter!
I'm glad you enjoyed... I too like the varied responses.... It's so interesting!
Appreciate you stopping by!
🌹💙
B
I'm glad you enjoyed... I too like the varied responses.... It's so interesting!
Appreciate you stopping by!
🌹💙
B