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The Song
“I am sure it is my dad having fun shooting stars in the afterlife!” - Rianne
A scarlet vibrancy,
Song in cardinal frequency
From a corner
Of a squared circular
Shape
Merging across
This
Land scape
Of shapes, that no one escapes -
Traveling
In
Unraveling
Life force -
Further
&
Further
Divorced from the source,
As seen by some,
Navigating a sometimes rudderless course
Into a poem of the unknown,
Making a home
Of
Homelessness sometimes sensing an
Otherness
Across an expanse
Of
Breezes
That
Dance
All night long
Delivering
The
Meaning
Of
The
Song
Published 14th May 2022
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14th May 2022 12:16pm
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- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
14th May 2022 4:09pm
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14th May 2022 4:20pm
I am so very glad R...
I think perhaps your father
was a descendent of Odin...
:)))
I think perhaps your father
was a descendent of Odin...
:)))
Anonymous
14th May 2022 5:07pm
Totally adore both this and the inspiration via Rianne's piece.... which almost had me teary, thinking of my own dad...
Just beautiful work.
What an awesome read.
thanks to you both!!
🌹 - 💙
hugs all around...
B
Just beautiful work.
What an awesome read.
thanks to you both!!
🌹 - 💙
hugs all around...
B
14th May 2022 7:30pm
I deeply admire the love in your
heart B...
And I am so happy this resonated with you...
You are such a beautiful soul...
I was telling Rianne...
I too see my father
in my dreams...
Some of these dreams
are deeply hieroglyphic & cryptic...
But it's like...
Somehow I understand...
Your father will always be with you...
heart B...
And I am so happy this resonated with you...
You are such a beautiful soul...
I was telling Rianne...
I too see my father
in my dreams...
Some of these dreams
are deeply hieroglyphic & cryptic...
But it's like...
Somehow I understand...
Your father will always be with you...
14th May 2022 6:48pm
14th May 2022 7:30pm
14th May 2022 11:21pm
Hey Cipher,
Wonderful tribute with such a vivid picture and poem.
I love the part about making a home out of homelessness.
In other words (for me) it is finding your place
on the other side while still being able to
breathe in a breeze. Hope that makes sense.
Loved this!!
Wonderful tribute with such a vivid picture and poem.
I love the part about making a home out of homelessness.
In other words (for me) it is finding your place
on the other side while still being able to
breathe in a breeze. Hope that makes sense.
Loved this!!
15th May 2022 4:35am
Your perspectives are so cool...
I am so grateful to you
for sharing them with me...
A is for something even beyond Awesome...
Even beyond Awesomeazing... :p
Deeply appreciative
I am so grateful to you
for sharing them with me...
A is for something even beyond Awesome...
Even beyond Awesomeazing... :p
Deeply appreciative
