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Spiraling
Having shed surfaces,
Like places
&
Faces,
This sun stained,
Entrained -
Breeze of believe
Must have been engrained
Deeper
Than can be conceived,
Where so many
Rifts
Drift -
This breath
Of
Life
Remained
In the pleasure
&
Pain
Of dune grass
From
The past
Into
The present
Moment
Infused with beauty
&
Lament
In a breeze of believe
Spiraling
Published 14th May 2022
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14th May 2022 12:18pm
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14th May 2022 3:04pm
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- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
14th May 2022 3:27pm
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14th May 2022 4:22pm
Thank you so much R...
I find it deeply interesting
how you can be gone for so long...
And yet the dune grass remains...
Timeless...
Understanding...
It is so beautiful it creates a pang in my heart
I find it deeply interesting
how you can be gone for so long...
And yet the dune grass remains...
Timeless...
Understanding...
It is so beautiful it creates a pang in my heart
14th May 2022 7:18pm
Thank you LilD...
That an amazing thing to say...
I really appreciate...
I saw the end of this first...
I saw the vision...
Then I pounced on the keys... :p
(That phrasing is so funny to me...)
I pounced on the keys...
But yes...
Tasking the mind forward & backward...
Very interesting operations...
I hav e written I think 2 pieces
from the bottom up...
Oh...
I was sort of astonished to
see that Suskin advocates to to do such things...
Correction... It was Harjo...
:)))
Nevertheless...
Thank you Me Lady...
I wrote two "Dune" pieces about to post...
That an amazing thing to say...
I really appreciate...
I saw the end of this first...
I saw the vision...
Then I pounced on the keys... :p
(That phrasing is so funny to me...)
I pounced on the keys...
But yes...
Tasking the mind forward & backward...
Very interesting operations...
I hav e written I think 2 pieces
from the bottom up...
Oh...
I was sort of astonished to
see that Suskin advocates to to do such things...
Correction... It was Harjo...
:)))
Nevertheless...
Thank you Me Lady...
I wrote two "Dune" pieces about to post...
