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Father of Hope
An enriched bountiful heart
With the power of wealth
On a zenith pilgrimage
Of the golden age of ages
Leaving decadence footprints
Woven in maps of opulence
Lavishing the poor
Converting the whores
Brocades draped over slaves
An entourage of silk brigades
A journey of sand miles
Lead by gold dust camels
To an enlightened path
Guided by jeweled staffs
Chronicled of his reign
Compassion without chains
With the power of wealth
On a zenith pilgrimage
Of the golden age of ages
Leaving decadence footprints
Woven in maps of opulence
Lavishing the poor
Converting the whores
Brocades draped over slaves
An entourage of silk brigades
A journey of sand miles
Lead by gold dust camels
To an enlightened path
Guided by jeweled staffs
Chronicled of his reign
Compassion without chains
Published 13th May 2022
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13th May 2022 8:07am
Hello Lovely Friend
I love poetry, that makes me go off and learn something new. This poem did that. I went off to research the traveling, philanthropist, king and his golden riches. It brings to mind a wonderful word in my culture "Ubuntu" which means "a quality that includes the essential human virtues; compassion and humanity".
Your poem is beautifully written and a lovely tribute. The chosen form is perfect for this too, it holds a readers eye.
Thank you for sharing this, and the education which is much valued.
Blue Skies Amiga
Al
I love poetry, that makes me go off and learn something new. This poem did that. I went off to research the traveling, philanthropist, king and his golden riches. It brings to mind a wonderful word in my culture "Ubuntu" which means "a quality that includes the essential human virtues; compassion and humanity".
Your poem is beautifully written and a lovely tribute. The chosen form is perfect for this too, it holds a readers eye.
Thank you for sharing this, and the education which is much valued.
Blue Skies Amiga
Al
14th May 2022 10:34pm
Well hey Al - or should I say brother from another mother- hehehe
Thank you so much for this comment. I was actually referring to
I_IS_Me's avatar. I asked him if it was Jesus or Dracula? So far off base. LOL . He said it was a man named Mansa and gave me some backstory and I felt that spark my friend. Had to write about him.
I've heard of the pilgrimage to Mecca but did not know about Mansa.
Thought about all the price hikes going on right now.
I sure could use him right now with all the gas going up. LOL
Just give me one camel full of gold and I will be set.
So great seeing you on my page Al!!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
And the RL!!!
Woop Woop
Thank you so much for this comment. I was actually referring to
I_IS_Me's avatar. I asked him if it was Jesus or Dracula? So far off base. LOL . He said it was a man named Mansa and gave me some backstory and I felt that spark my friend. Had to write about him.
I've heard of the pilgrimage to Mecca but did not know about Mansa.
Thought about all the price hikes going on right now.
I sure could use him right now with all the gas going up. LOL
Just give me one camel full of gold and I will be set.
So great seeing you on my page Al!!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
And the RL!!!
Woop Woop
13th May 2022 8:25am
Mansa Musa!
The richest man in history...
Hell yeah A... Cool thing to write about.
I read how when people would visit him
he would send them away with their camels weighed down in gold...
Just for the hell of it... Basically. :p
No... It was so they could deliver the message to the ends of the Earth... :)))
You really captured this
in such a captivating manner...
You drop jewels like Mansa...
The richest man in history...
Hell yeah A... Cool thing to write about.
I read how when people would visit him
he would send them away with their camels weighed down in gold...
Just for the hell of it... Basically. :p
No... It was so they could deliver the message to the ends of the Earth... :)))
You really captured this
in such a captivating manner...
You drop jewels like Mansa...
14th May 2022 10:42pm
Hey Cipher,
hahah. Yes. Mr. Mansa was quite the generous man. I had never heard of him. Saw his avatar and was intrigued. Read about all of his glam. heheh Just giving it away like here you go - vaya con dios.
And I thought about inflation.
What we are heading towards right now
and how it kinda relates to modern times in a way. Cash isn't gold but it felt a bit relatable to where I am right now. Moving to Timbuktu and having to pay so much for gas just to get to work!!! hahah. I so could use a gold dust camel right now. LOL
Thanks for your snaps on this write!!
Always great to hear from you Cipher!!
I thank you from here to the Ends of the Earth!!!! hahahah
Woop Woop
hahah. Yes. Mr. Mansa was quite the generous man. I had never heard of him. Saw his avatar and was intrigued. Read about all of his glam. heheh Just giving it away like here you go - vaya con dios.
And I thought about inflation.
What we are heading towards right now
and how it kinda relates to modern times in a way. Cash isn't gold but it felt a bit relatable to where I am right now. Moving to Timbuktu and having to pay so much for gas just to get to work!!! hahah. I so could use a gold dust camel right now. LOL
Thanks for your snaps on this write!!
Always great to hear from you Cipher!!
I thank you from here to the Ends of the Earth!!!! hahahah
Woop Woop
13th May 2022 10:26am
14th May 2022 10:46pm
Hi Faith.
I am bowing to your applause amiga!!! hahah
Thank you so much for that awesome comment you just
dropped on my page. I just felt like it was such a cool
true story. Gifting Gold and wishing people prosperity at the same time. I just felt inspired about it.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
I am bowing to your applause amiga!!! hahah
Thank you so much for that awesome comment you just
dropped on my page. I just felt like it was such a cool
true story. Gifting Gold and wishing people prosperity at the same time. I just felt inspired about it.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
13th May 2022 1:46pm
There is nothing, absolutely nothing wrong with the brilliance here. Mansa was just one dude that knew the sins and burden of hoarding wealth while looking upon so many in need, Dang tight writing Lady
14th May 2022 10:51pm
Hey Me,
Man I gotta be honest. Was a little nervous posting this. I'm
from Catholic origins so this was a little out of my religion spectrum.
I so did not want to offend anyone that practices the Islamic faith.
I feel whatever feeds you spiritually is what you should practice.
I am not a religion snob. LOL
Dude (Mansa) was awesome!!
Such a treasure to mankind in his era.
Thanks for the inspiration and your rock star avatar. LOL
Felt that buzz while writing.
Man I gotta be honest. Was a little nervous posting this. I'm
from Catholic origins so this was a little out of my religion spectrum.
I so did not want to offend anyone that practices the Islamic faith.
I feel whatever feeds you spiritually is what you should practice.
I am not a religion snob. LOL
Dude (Mansa) was awesome!!
Such a treasure to mankind in his era.
Thanks for the inspiration and your rock star avatar. LOL
Felt that buzz while writing.
