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The Finest Art
They bury
The dead soldiers
Push
Sisyphean boulders
Are holders
Of
Herb healers
&
Flowers
Towers
Of
Magical powers
Lighting the darkest hours
Sowers
Of
Seeds
That grow
Like
Glistening dew
That feeds
Heart
&
Soul
Soul
&
Heart
The finest art
Author's Note
Mothers Day 2022 Series: #4
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Re. The Finest Art
Re: Re. The Finest Art
9th May 2022 7:59am
Re. The Finest Art
8th May 2022 8:18pm
The closing rhyme really hits for me. The title you prepared you for it and then it hits. Really effective work man.
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Re: Re. The Finest Art
9th May 2022 8:00am
Re. The Finest Art
Anonymous
9th May 2022 6:49am
Such emotional release, dear C...
I feel this one deeply.
Great visual choice , per usual.
I have come back to read it a couple of times...
Lovely penning.... Enjoyable series.
🌹 - 💙
B
I feel this one deeply.
Great visual choice , per usual.
I have come back to read it a couple of times...
Lovely penning.... Enjoyable series.
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re: Re. The Finest Art
9th May 2022 8:02am
Real cool...
Very glad to hear that B...
Thank you muchly...
(About to post a few and
then go for a run...:)))
Dude...
Kind of out of shape
but consciously enjoying the process...
Being mindful...
Adaptive...
Visualizing...
You inspired me...
Very glad to hear that B...
Thank you muchly...
(About to post a few and
then go for a run...:)))
Dude...
Kind of out of shape
but consciously enjoying the process...
Being mindful...
Adaptive...
Visualizing...
You inspired me...
Re: Re. The Finest Art
Anonymous
9th May 2022 9:00am
Glad to hear!!
Go get 'em.... Slow and steady wins the rebuildin' your stamina race!
😉 🏃♀️🏃🏽♂️ 💨
🌹 - 💙
Go get 'em.... Slow and steady wins the rebuildin' your stamina race!
😉 🏃♀️🏃🏽♂️ 💨
🌹 - 💙
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Re. The Finest Art
10th May 2022 5:02pm
And yet, thay are also just people, doing their flawed best....
Enjoyed all your mother's day tributes... lovely series. The art for this one is beautiful.
❤️k
Enjoyed all your mother's day tributes... lovely series. The art for this one is beautiful.
❤️k
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Re: Re. The Finest Art
10th May 2022 5:39pm
Re. The Finest Art
11th May 2022 4:10am
Hey Cipher,
So I made it to the last one posted. Such a lovely journey you took me on
reading these. I humbly thank you:)
Soul and heart
Finest art
(That is you amigo)
Later gator:)
So I made it to the last one posted. Such a lovely journey you took me on
reading these. I humbly thank you:)
Soul and heart
Finest art
(That is you amigo)
Later gator:)
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Re: Re. The Finest Art
11th May 2022 8:25am
That is such a kind & cool
thing to say...
Thank you for reading
& taking the time to comment on the series A...
In the back of my mind
I thought maybe you might like them...
I am glad I was correct
in this feeling...
In some ways it could be said
that I pursued the endeavor of this series...
For that fact alone...
thing to say...
Thank you for reading
& taking the time to comment on the series A...
In the back of my mind
I thought maybe you might like them...
I am glad I was correct
in this feeling...
In some ways it could be said
that I pursued the endeavor of this series...
For that fact alone...