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"The Best of Dreams"

[quatrains in iambic pentameter]  
      
The best of dreams are those I dream of You,  
revealed within our aching hot desire.  
Oh, darling one, I love the things you do,  
you raise me up and set my soul a’fire.  
     
Your hungry mouth, it wakes my sleeping eyes;  
then, travels to a place we know as bliss.  
I feel your warm, wet lips there on my thighs,  
as stars explode throughout each wondrous kiss.  
     
Inside our veins there flows a molten stream;  
deep rocking thrusts, ride like the steed of night,  
release all inhibitions from our dream,  
as though they’ve risen-up and took to flight.  
     
Our fiery breath leaves trails across the sky,  
those silver spangled bedsheets twirl and crease.  
In rhythmic flow pearl rivers never dry,  
like lovers soaked in passion’s full release.  
     
Two naked flames light up the skies above,  
our glow’s a beacon to the world below.  
The best of dreams are those with You, my love;  
and, these sweet dreams I'm never letting go.
 
 
Written by RichardJ
Published | Edited 16th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Artwork by Andrew Gonzales, gesso on board.

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