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drag on fly
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drag on fly
a wasp in a dream
ah i see you too like a
staccato rhythm
Written by
to_be_me
Published
5th May 2022
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Re. drag on fly
Honoria
5th May 2022 7:27am
Dear tbm,
I enjoyed this greatly. Pulling apart the word dragonfly, creating another rhythmic value, great write. H 🌷
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to_be_me
5th May 2022 5:21pm
thank you dear H for your kind encouragement.
means much to me .
much appreciated and much loved.
may you be happy :)
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Re. drag on fly
LilDragonFly
5th May 2022 9:33am
Nice and crisp…
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Re: Re. drag on fly
to_be_me
5th May 2022 5:23pm
thank you Lil.
you have much worthy wings than my words.
much love and respect :)
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Re. drag on fly
wallyroo92
20th Dec 2022 4:15pm
Lovely haiku with a great word play on the title.
Nice work.
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