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Entropy
The thinking
is sinking me
to the bottom.
Stuck,
fucked
and depressed.
Sit, sit, sitting here
conversing with my fear
about absolutely nothing.
Can't get out the car
rather be at the bar
drinking til there is silence.
is sinking me
to the bottom.
Stuck,
fucked
and depressed.
Sit, sit, sitting here
conversing with my fear
about absolutely nothing.
Can't get out the car
rather be at the bar
drinking til there is silence.
Published 4th May 2022
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4th May 2022 3:36pm
Dear N,
The energy for change and something else is jumping off the page in this piece. I can totally relate to this poem with every fiber of what is left of myself. You just say it so much better. H🌷
The energy for change and something else is jumping off the page in this piece. I can totally relate to this poem with every fiber of what is left of myself. You just say it so much better. H🌷
4th May 2022 3:40pm
4th May 2022 4:22pm
4th May 2022 4:23pm
7th May 2022 1:49am
22nd May 2022 2:05pm
Mind races, heart aches, confusion prevails and silence screams. Come across those moments to be just numb. You write the impact of moment. It goes straight to the heart to force you to act.
Love,
Ks
Love,
Ks
22nd May 2022 4:33pm
24th Jun 2022 9:44pm
Like being stuck in the specifics of limbo, it's pretty intense.
Great write.
Great write.
