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No object I

I'm not sure which bothers me more,
that my poetry
isn't that great
or that poetry
isn't written about me.

I think upon this with overly cooled temper.

Being so self-absorbed
and narcissistic ,
means I can at least
write about myself
if nothing else.

Still,
loves requires
a little give and take,
I hear,
from my solitary spot in the sandpit.
Written by Viddax (Lord Viddax)
Published
Author's Note
Not quite wallowing in useless self-pity, but addressing one rather lonely elephant in the room.
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