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I Do...
I do
Want to suck your dick while you're sitting down
I'll suck it anyway you want me to
And I do
Want you to
Grab hold of my hair as I go to town
On you...
Your dick has been wanting this
Been waiting for this
Mouth of mine
To take it's time
Licking
And sucking
You love it
When I swirl my tongue to the tip
Around and around
It goes
I know
You feel wonders
As all of a sudden
Your dick plunders
Into my warm slick opening...
Yes, I love it
Pleasing
That cum out of you...
It's gratifying
And sends shocks of wondrous feelings straight down
To my kitty-kat
And so
This need to make your dick hit
The back
Of my throat
Wins over
And so
I choke
From trying
To be greedy...
Don't you know
I can't help it, sweetie;)
I do
Want to suck your dick
And make you
Never forget
Your dick is mine
For the rest of time
I do...
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Written on 12-14-12 by Tara AKA LL
Want to suck your dick while you're sitting down
I'll suck it anyway you want me to
And I do
Want you to
Grab hold of my hair as I go to town
On you...
Your dick has been wanting this
Been waiting for this
Mouth of mine
To take it's time
Licking
And sucking
You love it
When I swirl my tongue to the tip
Around and around
It goes
I know
You feel wonders
As all of a sudden
Your dick plunders
Into my warm slick opening...
Yes, I love it
Pleasing
That cum out of you...
It's gratifying
And sends shocks of wondrous feelings straight down
To my kitty-kat
And so
This need to make your dick hit
The back
Of my throat
Wins over
And so
I choke
From trying
To be greedy...
Don't you know
I can't help it, sweetie;)
I do
Want to suck your dick
And make you
Never forget
Your dick is mine
For the rest of time
I do...
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Written on 12-14-12 by Tara AKA LL
Published 15th Mar 2012
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15th Mar 2012 6:31pm
my dick wants to be sucked
as much as it wants to be fucked
& with the way you just described
well it will never try to hide
because your words said it best
i just hope the dick can pass your sexual test....lol
as much as it wants to be fucked
& with the way you just described
well it will never try to hide
because your words said it best
i just hope the dick can pass your sexual test....lol
15th Mar 2012 7:12pm
There u go again tryna get me n 2 trouble!! Im jus playin, LOL! But seriously thanks for reading and complimenting so pleasantly;)
15th Mar 2012 6:56pm
......that you are. "I" do (and most certainly did) ; ) Those vows right there would make me yours for lyfe. x-cellent write.
15th Mar 2012 7:19pm
oh gosh, man u 2 sweet! ;) and thanks for reading. Pleased 2 kno u enjoyed. ;)
15th Mar 2012 7:39pm
Not to sound cliche' but Game does recognize game. Eros is drawn to eros. You writing flows like you "know" what you're talking about. Maybe you needs 2 read this (if you haven't already)
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/31830-legs-over-my-shoulders/ ; )
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/31830-legs-over-my-shoulders/ ; )
15th Mar 2012 8:06pm
That is a passionately written poem and damn twas sooooo good, so so so good;)
15th Mar 2012 9:32pm
If you don't mind, I'd like you to comment on this one to. I realized that I have posted over 88 pieces here already. Kind of airing out some things I'm gonna' publish by fall. Your oppinion would mean a lot. We have a somewhat "similar" temperament.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/28214-what-would-you-do-if-i/ : )
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/28214-what-would-you-do-if-i/ : )
16th Mar 2012 00:58am
u kno man, i really love ya style an am a fan... u keep doin ya thang man, u got it in ya;)
19th Mar 2012 1:55am
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