The Ribbons and Her Darkness

harmonious and calmly felt…love the assured anxiety of it all :)
much respect.

Thank you so much, to_be.

Dear E,

I can only imagine a feeling of this magnitude. It must be amazing. I pulled two words I really loved “tranquil” and “harmonious”, they’re just random thoughts I had as I read the piece. These are such great words and used so wisely in this poem. Excellent write. H🌷

It’s suffocating sometimes in a really good way. I realize that makes no logical sense, but sometimes I lack the descriptors to adequately describe the feeling. Ah it’s rapturous though. I can say that! Thanks, H!  

I share your beautiful sentiments about the onset of twilight! For me, there has always been a special beauty in the afternoon and early nighttime, when the golden rays of the setting sun give way to the stars and eventually to the moon's pale splendor. I have indeed felt that sensation of my spirit feeling as if it were fusing, or perhaps bonding with the moment and there is this electric-like rush of excitement and this profound sense of peacefulness. It is a rapture indeed, and one that you just have to experience because words might fail to describe it accurately! So many things in your poems, I noticed tonight, which resonate with me and things from my own life. It seems we are poetic kindreds, in some ways! But that is not a bad thing... rather, it would be a more beautiful world if more people could come to appreciate the beauty of the night or the cool feel of one's toes in water, or the power of one blissful moment. Very profound works! I am happy to be reading through them this evening. You have great talent! :D

Wonderful spill. It's like that flash of that blissful emotion overtaking every sense, in the spiritual sense.
Nicely done.

The presence from this piece is truly serene and divinely understandable. Wow! U are truly talented for real. A nice make u think poem. Have u ever been enraptured by something, that, u could swear u feel your soul fusing. This line is the agreeable.