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Become myself
Become myself
written July 24th, 2021
I say I want
to be a better poet
but I am also stubborn.
I don't want
people telling me
what my poems should be.
I want my poems
to become better
at being me. I write to
become myself.
written July 24th, 2021
I say I want
to be a better poet
but I am also stubborn.
I don't want
people telling me
what my poems should be.
I want my poems
to become better
at being me. I write to
become myself.
Published 26th Apr 2022
Author's Note
Love the song "Become You" by Indigo Girls, though when I read the lyrics, it's really about a very different topic than this poem. Just a light little one.
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4th May 2022 11:28pm
I like the pacing of this piece...
I think it works for the underlying
sentiment...
And alludes to poetic voice...
The subtle use of poetic device
adds a captivating dimension...
This is quite wonderful...
I think it works for the underlying
sentiment...
And alludes to poetic voice...
The subtle use of poetic device
adds a captivating dimension...
This is quite wonderful...
28th Aug 2022 5:37pm
