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A Flower Pot Woman, And A Little Weed!
Such a complicated seed
When given some free weed
Tobacco, and papers, i had to buy
The cost of this caper, made me cry
A free gift
Gave me short shrift
Just under fourteen pounds
Perhaps i'll discover
A new profound
Oh look, a Monkey Puzzle tree
Little titters
And a he he he!
by Jemia
Published 23rd Apr 2022
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23rd Apr 2022 8:57pm
Fourteen pounds!! Life is getting a bit expensive around here! I enjoyed this bit of light relief, and the way you played with rhyme.
23rd Apr 2022 9:49pm
i had no idea that rizlas, and tobacco were so expensive (gave up 5 years ago) but needed it as i was given a freebie, i could smoke it neat, but my head only wants to visit local planets, not float around hyper space!
23rd Apr 2022 9:15pm
23rd Apr 2022 9:51pm
glad you liked this, doing good, and now reading poetry at local events! the sun is up, the sky is blue, actually it's now night time, so this isn't true! :) x
