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getting smaller
Beneath the stars I feel even smaller
And yet I’m witnessing the most magnificent thing
And so when I am small
I’m a part of something great.
If only I knew
what to do
in the day
And yet I’m witnessing the most magnificent thing
And so when I am small
I’m a part of something great.
If only I knew
what to do
in the day
Published 21st Apr 2022
Author's Note
I love myself but some days I really really don’t like myself :( it’ll pass. Just some sad poems in the lonely server for now 💔
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21st Apr 2022 7:30am
Dear S,
An extremely relatable poem. Measuring ourselves to the universe can really put some perspective on things and I really appreciated the undercurrent of sadness in this poem as well as the notion of appreciation to the greatness of nature. (Your authors note is a poem in itself) Great write. H🌷
An extremely relatable poem. Measuring ourselves to the universe can really put some perspective on things and I really appreciated the undercurrent of sadness in this poem as well as the notion of appreciation to the greatness of nature. (Your authors note is a poem in itself) Great write. H🌷
21st Apr 2022 3:38pm
First, I am ecstatic to see comments on my two recents! I feel like my poems never reach anybody and it’s just such a nice feeling to *see* another soul in this community c:
And thank you so much. I felt so empty last night and your comments have been such a lovely thing to wake up to. I’m following you <3
And thank you so much. I felt so empty last night and your comments have been such a lovely thing to wake up to. I’m following you <3
18th Jul 2022 7:00pm
This is exactly how I feel in the sea! Not only do I feel part of something far bigger, but I feel more like myself and who I'm meant to be. No idea why! I loved this, anyway.
