Defined and Wanting

Rules dont apply, PS. I thought especially YOU knew this!  Great write, love you <3

True
I break so many of them
Professional
Xx

Same  

xxx

We're criminals

Only some of us are hardened, right?  <3

hello dearest Poet I love the powerful tenderness here
beautifully seductive ❤️

Thanks Brenda

Kinda mysterious, that's my style ....

Thx
❤🧡

You go after what you want.  Keep on writing

Going for it and not stopping till I get her .....

I think you see more than most. Must be the artist's eye.
Beautiful.
❤️k

Artist's do feel a lot.  Writing was something I hadn't done in eons.
Glad you see that part of me ....

Thx k

X

Dear PS,

So glad to see you! I enjoyed the tango on this poem. That sultry dance with a push/pull, yes/no, wait/now type vibe. The anticipated excitement of something that’s not quite…fill in the blank. Great piece. H🌷

Dear H,

This was an older poem I reworked a bit.   I have so many poems, some of them look new again ....  I'm glad you enjoyed it, makes me happy.....

Thx ❤

Hey PS

Love the line An Unspoken Language.
Makes me think your art. You definitely have that in spades amigo!!
Do it without even trying:)

I'm digging your older stuff.
Super Cool to read this treasure trove.

Yes, my older stuff was HIGH OCTANE .....

There's plenty to read too ..

New art is being made

Stay tuned Hot Sauce 🔥

Thank you always 💓

Enjoying this style, PoetSpeak.

LJ

Defined but not defined
A lot of mystery here in what I'm not saying

Appreciate the nod and RL ....LJ

Powerful bits of food for the soul and mind

right on my mans,.right on

Wash it down with a pint of love ❤

Thx PoH

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This was a touching read to begin my day!

Thank you

I’m glad it hit home …..

Another A+ and engaging creative thoughts. Hugs and peace (O)=(O)

Thanks Captain !

Appreciate you

An honor my General. XO

hey there, i'm not around often these days, but this was a surprising little gem. i didn't find it super mysterious, but rather descriptive, accessible, relatable, showing just enough ankle to be suggestive in that first stanza. smexay :)

only because you marked the poem for honest critique, if i could change anything about the poem, it would be the last line of S2. I think you could get away with "signposts of love *pasted* on the walls" but unless you were being intentional with the repetition of "signpost" and "posted" in the same line, just my humble opinion, it would read better with a substitute for either of those words.

lovely little read, thanks for sharing

You know I kind of had trouble with that line.  
Something never felt quite right.  I made the change
Thank you for your critique and suggestion  !!

"An unspoken language" just about says it all. It's so true and relatable for most of us.
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You find all the intimacy in the Unspoken Language.  I'm glad that comes through on this one...

Thx Wally