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"BYE NOW"
The pink moon broke on everyone like a wave
Now remembrance follows several days
Of feast and resurrection
We send messages in each other’s direction
Irrigate red eyes with the reliable sea
Softly wipe away our faces and just be
Burn pepperwood leaves and sage
It helps when the passed had a good laugh
And a catch phrase
Now remembrance follows several days
Of feast and resurrection
We send messages in each other’s direction
Irrigate red eyes with the reliable sea
Softly wipe away our faces and just be
Burn pepperwood leaves and sage
It helps when the passed had a good laugh
And a catch phrase
Published 20th Apr 2022
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20th Apr 2022 9:51pm
20th Apr 2022 10:00pm
Thank you. There are poems I write because of the NaPo requirement, and there are poems I write because it's the only way for me to process things. This is one of the latter.
21st Apr 2022 00:02am
the lines linger..the feelings might linger even more..
the beauty however stays put.
thank you for the beautiful words.
the beauty however stays put.
thank you for the beautiful words.
Ča kidi. That is a way of saying you're welcome in Northern Pomo, literally = "It's good." Pronounced "tcha-keedee"
21st Apr 2022 00:24am
21st Apr 2022 1:27am
My girlfriend is a Pomo weaver. She inspires many of my poems one way or another. The word for thank you is "Yawi."
21st Apr 2022 4:26am
Oh wow - cool. nice to know.
with a sheepish grin - "yawi" :)
appreciated much again :)
with a sheepish grin - "yawi" :)
appreciated much again :)
21st May 2022 5:59pm
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