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19th Apr 2022 00:46am
The use of line breaks to convey conflicted meanings is very powerful in your poetry. The world is pretty but also fragile. This poem means a lot to me as someone who can feel on an even keel but then plummet into deep depths of despair because of the smallest external stressor. Thank you for this.
19th Apr 2022 1:28am
19th Apr 2022 2:33am
It really doesn't take much. We grow old, our world shrinks.....and so do we.....
