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My words became fewer as the days stretch along.
Now just observing from afar.
Within reach, but just barely.
Light in these tired eyes faltering.
This scarred heart no longer crying, the beat soft near silent
Fading to the black, my spirit shivering
Left frozen.
There's a new peace found
Even with these masks now broken.
Slipped into the background forgotten.
Into the calm of the night,
Finally blurred from all line of sight.
Now just observing from afar.
Within reach, but just barely.
Light in these tired eyes faltering.
This scarred heart no longer crying, the beat soft near silent
Fading to the black, my spirit shivering
Left frozen.
There's a new peace found
Even with these masks now broken.
Slipped into the background forgotten.
Into the calm of the night,
Finally blurred from all line of sight.
Published 13th Apr 2022
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13th Apr 2022 10:21am
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Hoi hoi
Only two comments and no reply?
I know you’re not obliged anything and no one is……
But I would have thought a poem like this more praise worthy, if you know what I mean.
Applaus applaus applaus (I believe in English it’s applause. Thank you apple mafia)
Frankly the first time I felt that emoji’s would have bailed me out.
I don’t want to go to intrude your thoughts, intentions etc. but I think you’d be better off with more applause than you’re getting now.
Kind regards, Gus
Only two comments and no reply?
I know you’re not obliged anything and no one is……
But I would have thought a poem like this more praise worthy, if you know what I mean.
Applaus applaus applaus (I believe in English it’s applause. Thank you apple mafia)
Frankly the first time I felt that emoji’s would have bailed me out.
I don’t want to go to intrude your thoughts, intentions etc. but I think you’d be better off with more applause than you’re getting now.
Kind regards, Gus
