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Dance in the rain
I want
to dance
with you
in the
pouring rain
our bodies
finally so close
kissing your mouth
my tongue
tracing your lips
feeling your hands
gently caressing
my rain soaked body
I can feel
the desire
burning for me
deep inside
your soul
the hunger
fuels the fire
both so
captivated
both
so free
Will you
dance in the rain
with me?
to dance
with you
in the
pouring rain
our bodies
finally so close
kissing your mouth
my tongue
tracing your lips
feeling your hands
gently caressing
my rain soaked body
I can feel
the desire
burning for me
deep inside
your soul
the hunger
fuels the fire
both so
captivated
both
so free
Will you
dance in the rain
with me?
Published 14th Mar 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Mar 2012 3:09am
14th Mar 2012 3:08am
is that the way the poem is formed, it makes it hard to read. Sometimes subtle changes in the flow can be good, but this one is not the case. It would have read better in more of a verse structure. :) Otherwise, a decent read! I look forward to reading more of your work!
14th Mar 2012 12:52pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2019 3:45am
30th Apr 2012 4:48pm
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