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The Modern Vixen
The modern vixen
can work
from their house
to rake in cheese
from the mouse.
It's all done online
nowadays;
a throwaway excuse
for thrown-away cash
chasing a glimpse
of that ass.
Just a tip
for a slight
nip slip,
or a hint
of strip,
as far far away
paying princelings
unzip
to the
pleasing clip.
Because
when you've been paid
and can't get laid,
there are plenty
of eyelash
to remotely smash
after you
spurt up the cash.
can work
from their house
to rake in cheese
from the mouse.
It's all done online
nowadays;
a throwaway excuse
for thrown-away cash
chasing a glimpse
of that ass.
Just a tip
for a slight
nip slip,
or a hint
of strip,
as far far away
paying princelings
unzip
to the
pleasing clip.
Because
when you've been paid
and can't get laid,
there are plenty
of eyelash
to remotely smash
after you
spurt up the cash.
Published 10th Apr 2022
| Edited 11th Apr 2022
Author's Note
Ex-Entry 10 for NaPoWriMo 2022. Its amazing what can be done and found on the internet these days..... (An underwhelming piece from what I envisioned.)
Isn't that good, and isn't acceptable for NaPoWriMo's non-erotica rule; I always disliked erotica!
Isn't that good, and isn't acceptable for NaPoWriMo's non-erotica rule; I always disliked erotica!
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Yeah...
I can see what the intention was here... but can also see why you feel it's underwhelming.
I'm unsure of Napos rules this year, I didn't read them as I wasn't in position to enter but my gut feel is that this piece is observational not erotic.
From an observation POV it is candid, apt and relevant. This is indeed the state or the world right now. Every second "home executive" is a porn star and the question that mulls in my mind is do the husband's and families know?
Lol
Thanks for the ryming read!
Al
I can see what the intention was here... but can also see why you feel it's underwhelming.
I'm unsure of Napos rules this year, I didn't read them as I wasn't in position to enter but my gut feel is that this piece is observational not erotic.
From an observation POV it is candid, apt and relevant. This is indeed the state or the world right now. Every second "home executive" is a porn star and the question that mulls in my mind is do the husband's and families know?
Lol
Thanks for the ryming read!
Al
12th Apr 2022 8:10pm
A case of getting it to fill the need, rather than to empty the drive and desire. The poem that is.
With times as they are, being self-employed and home-based in the world's oldest trade, is a better choice for making money than to starve. Moral superiority doesn't emit enough of a glow to heat a whole house.
With times as they are, being self-employed and home-based in the world's oldest trade, is a better choice for making money than to starve. Moral superiority doesn't emit enough of a glow to heat a whole house.
12th Apr 2022 8:15pm
Absolutely 💯
My brother and I were talking with some business execs the other day... every single one of them has been moonlighting in someway or another over the last 3 years. That massively reduces the pot of opportunity for the unemployed...
No moral high ground should take place..
My brother and I were talking with some business execs the other day... every single one of them has been moonlighting in someway or another over the last 3 years. That massively reduces the pot of opportunity for the unemployed...
No moral high ground should take place..
12th Apr 2022 8:37pm
Something about the rich getting richer! My theory being that its not about brains, or wits or charisma, but opportunity; and more opportunities open yet more doors.
