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Ow

Ow, that hurts
It should be a little uncomfortable
Thatís not a little, thatís a lot
Are you sure?
Do you want me to try it on you?
No thanks
I thought you said you knew how to do this
Well, I do
Apparently not
I think the mood is gone
Some mood
garyd
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