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Sooner or Later... (You know I'll be dead.)
I missed the boat
On that
One… Awww shit.
I say
to
My self – Stealth,
In the hollow
Of
A shadow
In a thought process
Followed
To the bitter end
Of fire
&
Flames
It sometimes seems
As
A Tiffany’s commercial
Deems
Me a live
Loser
In
Love.
Published 9th Apr 2022
Author's Note
It's a complicated affair... Sometimes.
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9th Apr 2022 9:04pm
11th Apr 2022 7:54am
Thank you LDF.
I really very much appreciate you.
Your comment made me think about
how I used to attempt to fit such complicated forms...
Into a single poem. (or something to this effect.)
I realize that such complicated forms
can be broken into pieces, upon which we might reflect...
Like playing chess against the self...
Observing the flux of our truths,
and gaining more and more levels of clarity... Perhaps.
I have this image of a "serpent of knowledge"...
Where each scale
is a piece of poetry... A piece of the complicated form.
This is an idea I had for a poem,
inspired by your comment...
You inspire me very much, and I deeply appreciate this.
I really very much appreciate you.
Your comment made me think about
how I used to attempt to fit such complicated forms...
Into a single poem. (or something to this effect.)
I realize that such complicated forms
can be broken into pieces, upon which we might reflect...
Like playing chess against the self...
Observing the flux of our truths,
and gaining more and more levels of clarity... Perhaps.
I have this image of a "serpent of knowledge"...
Where each scale
is a piece of poetry... A piece of the complicated form.
This is an idea I had for a poem,
inspired by your comment...
You inspire me very much, and I deeply appreciate this.
