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Internal Commentary
(am i wearing the right shirt)
(she looks really hot)
(do i have bad breath)
i often have
internal commentary
(did she see me
drip mustard on the right shirt)
(i'm not
assertive enough)
(she probably
hates me)
(they don’t like
my idea)
(can he smell
my farts)
i often have
internal commentary
about how
other people see me
or how
i see myself
i need to stop judging
myself
(my opinions of myself)
sometimes get in the way
of being my self
what if
i am
infinitely bigger
than
what i think
i am
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
(she looks really hot)
(do i have bad breath)
i often have
internal commentary
(did she see me
drip mustard on the right shirt)
(i'm not
assertive enough)
(she probably
hates me)
(they don’t like
my idea)
(can he smell
my farts)
i often have
internal commentary
about how
other people see me
or how
i see myself
i need to stop judging
myself
(my opinions of myself)
sometimes get in the way
of being my self
what if
i am
infinitely bigger
than
what i think
i am
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
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