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Internal Commentary

(am i wearing the right shirt)

(she looks really hot)

(do i have bad breath)

i often have
internal commentary

(did she see me
drip mustard on the right shirt)

(i'm not
assertive enough)

(she probably
hates me)

(they don’t like
my idea)

(can he smell
my farts)

i often have
internal commentary

about how
other people see me

or how
i see myself

i need to stop judging
myself

(my opinions of myself)
sometimes get in the way

of being my self

what if

i am
infinitely bigger

than

what i think
i am

(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
Written by Kinkpoet
Published
Author's Note
Triggered by houghts during a guided meditation.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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