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Evanescence
Wispy, whispered clouds crawl
lazily across retreating midnight
as if they, from fleeting experience
know nothing will last forever.
Sublime sun’s shine awakens
boldly beneath the sleeping horizon
as if he, from steadfast observation
believes he will be the one to persist.
But the munificent moon just smiles
kindly across the morning divide
as if she, from gathered wisdom
has learned the clouds are right.
lazily across retreating midnight
as if they, from fleeting experience
know nothing will last forever.
Sublime sun’s shine awakens
boldly beneath the sleeping horizon
as if he, from steadfast observation
believes he will be the one to persist.
But the munificent moon just smiles
kindly across the morning divide
as if she, from gathered wisdom
has learned the clouds are right.
Published 7th Apr 2022
Author's Note
NaPo 7/30 - inspired by photo (Husham Alasadi).
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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7th Apr 2022 4:20pm
7th Apr 2022 4:24pm
11th Apr 2022 5:35am
Finding the majesty of the daily rotations
there is grace in a slower pace
and warmth in the simple joy
a calmness we should be reluctant to replace
terrific write
there is grace in a slower pace
and warmth in the simple joy
a calmness we should be reluctant to replace
terrific write
11th Apr 2022 1:39pm
21st Apr 2022 00:07am
love the wisdom that you have made your clouds spout :)
alliteratively alluring, a beautiful exposition of a natural phenomenon creatively penned.
much thanks for the wonderful imagery and the wise words. deeply appreciated.
alliteratively alluring, a beautiful exposition of a natural phenomenon creatively penned.
much thanks for the wonderful imagery and the wise words. deeply appreciated.
10th May 2022 3:22am
10th May 2022 3:03am
What a beautiful, spectacular way to write about the natural splendor of the sun and the moon, and their cycles! I truly love it, and the poetic language that you used all throughout. It has a deeply colorful feel to it, and it makes me recall so many beautiful, brilliant sunrises and sunsets that I have seen over the years! It is not a long poem, nor does it need to be. It is evocative of all that it is trying to represent, and that is enough to convey a world of beauty! Thank you for posting this on here... and, keep up the amazing poetic work. :)
10th May 2022 3:23am
10th May 2022 3:30am
Not a problem! It was my pleasure to comment so brightly on such a great work of poetic artistry. :D
22nd May 2022 12:58pm
This is just beautiful, and the illustration is perfect! Right up my street. Well done.
22nd May 2022 5:08pm
6th Jun 2022 4:44pm
Wonderfully spilled Luna. The photo accompanies the piece very nicely, serene and spiritually fulfilling.
6th Jun 2022 9:38pm
