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“The End”
when you wrote me those words
did you think how much it would devastate me
of course not, cause your heart don’t feel
thought I was never to cry over you again
until looking in the mirror
seeing the reflection of this sad soul weeping
tears bigger than raindrops
when Angel’s cry from above
my thoughts can’t stop reading those words
“The End”
© 2022 Flowergirl
did you think how much it would devastate me
of course not, cause your heart don’t feel
thought I was never to cry over you again
until looking in the mirror
seeing the reflection of this sad soul weeping
tears bigger than raindrops
when Angel’s cry from above
my thoughts can’t stop reading those words
“The End”
© 2022 Flowergirl
Author's Note
THE END is here, for……. Us, words, time!
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5th Apr 2022 10:23pm
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8th Apr 2022 00:21am
Hey Ron, your words gave me comfort, thank you for feeling it with me, you always make me feel hugged, thank you, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
5th Apr 2022 10:49pm
And I wish I could take away all your pain🙏🏻🌸 it’s that beautiful heart 💜 of yours that is so worth getting love returned🌟
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Awe Lily, I would do the same for you, we both know though, it’s a heart pain that lasts for what feels like forever, in time it won’t even be a memory, thank you Sister, honored for the RL, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Apr 2022 1:16am
Much love, Flowergirl. Those that love the deepest will experience the greatest of pains. xo
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8th Apr 2022 00:31am
Hey Ahavati, wonderful to see you upon my page, I believe you’re right about that, life always seems to hurt, thank you for the luv you’ve brought me, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Apr 2022 1:20am
According to the song the first cut is the deepest. You keep on fighting to get better. Keep on writing.
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8th Apr 2022 00:34am
Hey Phantom, that’s a good song, sad that’s for sure, thank you as always for encouragement and comfort of your smile upon my ink, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Apr 2022 10:11am
Dear FG,
Painful gut wrenching agony. You’ve written the nightmare of this experience all too well. I’m never sure nor will I ever understand why we need to go through this pain? The beauty of this poem is in it’s help for all of who’ve suffered this nightmare.
H🌷
Painful gut wrenching agony. You’ve written the nightmare of this experience all too well. I’m never sure nor will I ever understand why we need to go through this pain? The beauty of this poem is in it’s help for all of who’ve suffered this nightmare.
H🌷
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8th Apr 2022 00:43am
Hey H, I’m sorry you’re beautiful soul has gone thru this pain, I will never understand either, how a soul can’t luv another when they've shared beautiful moments together, honored by the RL, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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24th Apr 2022 1:34am
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26th Apr 2022 6:28pm
Hey Billy…….I’m more than sure this silence, is all I will hear, thank you my friend for the support as always, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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24th Apr 2022 7:36pm
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26th Apr 2022 6:29pm
Hey Crow…….I have so missed you, thrilled to read your inks again, honored to see your support upon my page, thank you, purple luv & hugs xo :)