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A Mother's Happy Cries
You daughter stirs as I enter you.
She chirps her imagined story
for an audience of dolls in the next room.
Her sweet voice fills our room as the
same sunlight waking her
paints your breasts with a glow.
I see pride in your eyes as we find our rhythm,
remembering what you have made.
I relax into your warm center and imagine her birth.
“You are beautiful,” I whisper, and you smile.
My head spins with the mix of your baby’s voice
accompanied by her mother’s happy cries.
She chirps her imagined story
for an audience of dolls in the next room.
Her sweet voice fills our room as the
same sunlight waking her
paints your breasts with a glow.
I see pride in your eyes as we find our rhythm,
remembering what you have made.
I relax into your warm center and imagine her birth.
“You are beautiful,” I whisper, and you smile.
My head spins with the mix of your baby’s voice
accompanied by her mother’s happy cries.
Published 5th Apr 2022
| Edited 3rd Jun 2023
Author's Note
A lover's husband left her soon after their daughter's birth. Though I was a little older, for a short time we were lovers.
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A carry on where the husband left off, picture of a glimpse of happy ending (no pun intended), of sex life and motherhood coexisting (' the mix of your baby’s voice accompanied by her mother’s happy cries.').
An idyllic scenario for any man who dates a woman who is a single mother. The fact the woman is a mother (ie has obviously enjoyed sex before and must have been attractive enough to get to conceive) can be part of the sexual attraction.
The poem inspired this rhyme from me:
A mother's happy cries
as under her he lies,
taking satisfaction
from their bedroom action,
while child in the next room
who issued from her womb
is happily talking
to dolls she likes playing.
With addition of some extra lines, I have posted a poem in this section inspired by yours.
An idyllic scenario for any man who dates a woman who is a single mother. The fact the woman is a mother (ie has obviously enjoyed sex before and must have been attractive enough to get to conceive) can be part of the sexual attraction.
The poem inspired this rhyme from me:
A mother's happy cries
as under her he lies,
taking satisfaction
from their bedroom action,
while child in the next room
who issued from her womb
is happily talking
to dolls she likes playing.
With addition of some extra lines, I have posted a poem in this section inspired by yours.
6th Apr 2022 8:55pm
6th Apr 2022 1:16am
8th Apr 2022 6:41am
