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As Long as Love Lasts
My days of modesty are passed
With this imperfect body I am blessed
To share in its pleasures brings joys beyond measure
I’ll love you as long as love lasts
With this imperfect body I am blessed
To share in its pleasures brings joys beyond measure
I’ll love you as long as love lasts
Published 1st Apr 2022
Author's Note
I used to feel insecure about my appearance but have come to accept myself now in my 40s. I sent this little rhyme and a clear pic to my lover while he was working. He said it was a distraction and thanked me for brightening his day. When he got off work, he brightened my night.
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1st Apr 2022 8:07pm
I find this deeply spiritual and uninhibitedly sensual, finding true freedom living in the moment.
11th Apr 2022 11:32am
Beautiful. I speak from two decades older (and having accepted how I look naked in the mirror, helped by fact I still keep myself fit) but I'd say you look too good for imperfections to put the beholder off. As well as the short rhyme I also liked the happy tail ending of your footnote:
He said it was a distraction and thanked me for brightening his day. When he got off work, he brightened my night.
As to 'imperfections', it may be a revelation that an anagram of NUDITY is UNTIDY! We can't all have production line perfection.
He said it was a distraction and thanked me for brightening his day. When he got off work, he brightened my night.
As to 'imperfections', it may be a revelation that an anagram of NUDITY is UNTIDY! We can't all have production line perfection.
Thank you for your thoughts. Wish I had all the emotional energy spent worrying about my imperfections. Acceptance is the more pleasurable way.
12th Apr 2022 8:02am
Agree about accepting yourself. When I go naked at home I usually think of myself being 'As nude as Nizana'.
2nd Apr 2022 00:08am
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6th Apr 2022 4:14pm
23rd Apr 2022 3:29pm
Modesty is over rated, especially for one as beautiful as you. Lovely photo!
More women really need to pay attention to this part of a relationship of continuously flirting with your man throughout the day.
For those that neglect these sometimes simple, small, erotic and romantic interactions they look in disbelief when their relationships go south.
Maybe some Masterclasses from you would go a long way in these matters.
You're A Natural
For those that neglect these sometimes simple, small, erotic and romantic interactions they look in disbelief when their relationships go south.
Maybe some Masterclasses from you would go a long way in these matters.
You're A Natural
