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Nostalgia...
Here the sun seems different from elsewhere.
Nostalgia lingers in the walls.
Sadness and happiness both merge within me.
Giving birth to something unique...
Nostalgia lingers in the walls.
Sadness and happiness both merge within me.
Giving birth to something unique...
Published 31st Mar 2022
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31st Mar 2022 7:45pm
31st Mar 2022 11:26pm
1st Apr 2022 1:27am
Hey Blue, beautiful short ink, all things change, some for the good, this filled me with emotions, purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
13th May 2022 8:15am
💙 it!
Hope you are doing well
🌹 - B
Hope you are doing well
🌹 - B
23rd Jun 2022 9:21pm
I like this feeling of being in nostalgia, that the light is different, because things are being seen in a different way, the present reflecting on the past, the way that colors things.
It's a short piece, but I see some places that could be trimmed, to perhaps make it a little tighter, but I don't know if that's the sort of friendly feedback you want. If you're curious, let me know. :-)
It's a short piece, but I see some places that could be trimmed, to perhaps make it a little tighter, but I don't know if that's the sort of friendly feedback you want. If you're curious, let me know. :-)
