You Giggled Again

…If this was any more pure, I’d be pouring it into my earl grey like honey.

I think what I’ve always liked about your poetry is that it has this ability to zone in on a moment of time. An unremarkable moment in time, made remarkable. And that’s something I can totally get behind in poetry.

I found the tags slightly bemusing. You’ve got love, love… then unrequited love, meaning “love not returned”. I dunno if that was intentional or not, but it adds a certain sense of mystery to the story.

I don’t want to say this was beautiful, but it made me add honey to my cup.

Thank you for sharing this.

-M

Hello

Thank you for your very kind comment.

I can't tell you how grateful I am that your eyes saw the tags.. that was definitely a finger slip and an awful one.

You are a rock!
Thank you

Al

Ahaha, you welcome. Missy DeMeanour: making sure people’s significant others know they are loved since forever. 😎

-M

I don't associate with Collette or Phil.
But thanks for the deck

Me neither, who is Collette and Phil?

Unsure about the deck too, what's that about bro?

In a better world, a poem like this would belong in the Erotic section. It’s very specifically physical and sensual, focusing on hair as it interacts with cloth, thighs as naturally lit, and praises to the skin. Unfortunately, this world we’re in tends to confuse erotica with pornography, but that doesn’t mean that this isn’t a beautiful erotic work.

Hello

Thank you for visiting my.poem and for the wonderful things you've said.

I don't often contribute to erotic sections anymore;
I find being in the sea of pornography uneasy on most my poetry. I feel there's a place for loving and place for the hard-core these days.

Love will do that to person.

Nice to see you around.
Thank you

Al

Another masterpiece. Thanks. (O)

Aah O!

you're overly kind, man!

not sure I'm deserving of that, but I'll pop it my pocket all the same!

Thank You!

Al

Perfection and reality are easy to spot and honestly comment on. Hugs and love, Oral