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Moment of Eternity
Window to worlds,
Composed
In time tested disposition,
Fear
Has become a sphere
Of
Mindful habitation,
Faced
&
Replaced
With a refined mind,
Capturing
The
Moment
Of anticipation -
Elation,
Filtered and muted
As the
Operation is executed
Adeptly:
To reach forth
For
A
Moment
of
Eternity...
Published 26th Mar 2022
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26th Mar 2022 6:07pm
good morning dearest Cipher I think we mute out fear as well as pain
I love this understanding you have of such things ❤️
I love this understanding you have of such things ❤️
27th Mar 2022 00:10am
Thank you for your wonderful perspective,
Crimsin.
And the wonderful compliment.
I very much appreciate.
Crimsin.
And the wonderful compliment.
I very much appreciate.
26th Mar 2022 6:43pm
27th Mar 2022 00:11am
Anonymous
26th Mar 2022 7:34pm
Hey there, C
It's always the best, most delicious moments that fleet and flicker in an instant... Whereas the impossibly harsh and brutal, seem to last eons...
Excellent thought provoking, dear friend 🙏
Reminds me of an old Janeane Garofalo stand up bit that always made me giggle....
https://youtu.be/9qr6BUNYQJE
It's around 22:36
Although the whole stand-up is really funny, imo!
Wonderfully poeted
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏
🌹 - B
It's always the best, most delicious moments that fleet and flicker in an instant... Whereas the impossibly harsh and brutal, seem to last eons...
Excellent thought provoking, dear friend 🙏
Reminds me of an old Janeane Garofalo stand up bit that always made me giggle....
https://youtu.be/9qr6BUNYQJE
It's around 22:36
Although the whole stand-up is really funny, imo!
Wonderfully poeted
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏
🌹 - B
27th Mar 2022 00:13am
So true, B.
Strange dynamics.
Lol @ the Garofalo. (Thank you for sharing that
with me.)
Thank you for this comment.
Strange dynamics.
Lol @ the Garofalo. (Thank you for sharing that
with me.)
Thank you for this comment.
This reminds me when I was in middle school and going to the
city pool in our town.
There was a low diving board and a very very high diving board - I am terrified of heights.
To the point of getting vertigo.
I finally got the nerve to get up there.
Talk about walking the plank.
I walked back and forth. Took me forever - to the point of going back to the ladder to climb back down.
but my friends were already waiting on the ladder to go next so I couldn't go back down.
Ughh - Even typing this - I'm having a flashback.
Even the lifeguards were yelling- just go - it will be fine. We're right here!!
So I sat down on the board and skootched off. hahahah - totally lame - but I did it.
Talk about a moment of eternity.
That picture with this poem totally took me there.
So thanks for the mini nervous breakdown. hahahah
In all seriousness - this is awesome.
The whole shebang amigo:)
city pool in our town.
There was a low diving board and a very very high diving board - I am terrified of heights.
To the point of getting vertigo.
I finally got the nerve to get up there.
Talk about walking the plank.
I walked back and forth. Took me forever - to the point of going back to the ladder to climb back down.
but my friends were already waiting on the ladder to go next so I couldn't go back down.
Ughh - Even typing this - I'm having a flashback.
Even the lifeguards were yelling- just go - it will be fine. We're right here!!
So I sat down on the board and skootched off. hahahah - totally lame - but I did it.
Talk about a moment of eternity.
That picture with this poem totally took me there.
So thanks for the mini nervous breakdown. hahahah
In all seriousness - this is awesome.
The whole shebang amigo:)
27th Mar 2022 00:29am
The high dive is serious business.
You totally brought me
into the moment...
As thought we exchanged teleportations.
Although yours involved
a nervous breakdown.
You're welcome btw. heh heh heh.
Thank you A.
Very much appreciate your perspective...
You totally brought me
into the moment...
As thought we exchanged teleportations.
Although yours involved
a nervous breakdown.
You're welcome btw. heh heh heh.
Thank you A.
Very much appreciate your perspective...
