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Modern Eyes
Leather winged things
Clad in sad
Modernity gone mad,
Sending shrapnel
From
Madbomb detonations
In intonations
Of
Madness,
To a sectioned perception,
Filtering
The
Irrational rationale,
Watching -
Patiently waiting…
Contemplating.
Published 23rd Mar 2022
Author's Note
A sort of commentary on of the condition of modernity.
Maybe how the toxicity makes deformed creatures
that roam about...
Maybe how the toxicity makes deformed creatures
that roam about...
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23rd Mar 2022 6:01pm
23rd Mar 2022 6:43pm
Awesome comment!
I think of it as "the stop and breathe".
[Discordant]
I like that term a lot.
Thank you LDF.
Form is so interesting
in how it can channel and direct consciousness...
Form with words, to me...
Is an entirely different animal.
As compared to other mediums of art.
But I deeply appreciate your astute eye.
It has really illuminated
my individual evolution.
Oh...
I have been sort of steadily
writing 3 pieces per evening
but last night wrote a bit more.
Put some in the bank.:)))
Also gearing up for NAPO.
Im thinking of writing
in pure stanzas... Maybe in an epic form?
I am considering topics.
But yes. I think I wrote
double what I typically do?
Its strange... I feel like one
gets acclimated to work load?
It's definitely good to switch it
up... For the sake of elasticity and novelty.
I am a pattern seeking creature
though... :)
Nevertheless. I wrote a piece called:
"Divination by Words"
That is kind of cool.
A really profound concept, to me...
Hope you are having a beautiful day,
surrounded by beauty.
Im going to the writing lab. :)
(Been feeling kind of blue.
but all things go... You know.)
I think of it as "the stop and breathe".
[Discordant]
I like that term a lot.
Thank you LDF.
Form is so interesting
in how it can channel and direct consciousness...
Form with words, to me...
Is an entirely different animal.
As compared to other mediums of art.
But I deeply appreciate your astute eye.
It has really illuminated
my individual evolution.
Oh...
I have been sort of steadily
writing 3 pieces per evening
but last night wrote a bit more.
Put some in the bank.:)))
Also gearing up for NAPO.
Im thinking of writing
in pure stanzas... Maybe in an epic form?
I am considering topics.
But yes. I think I wrote
double what I typically do?
Its strange... I feel like one
gets acclimated to work load?
It's definitely good to switch it
up... For the sake of elasticity and novelty.
I am a pattern seeking creature
though... :)
Nevertheless. I wrote a piece called:
"Divination by Words"
That is kind of cool.
A really profound concept, to me...
Hope you are having a beautiful day,
surrounded by beauty.
Im going to the writing lab. :)
(Been feeling kind of blue.
but all things go... You know.)
23rd Mar 2022 10:33pm
23rd Mar 2022 11:09pm
24th Mar 2022 2:43am
24th Mar 2022 5:24am
24th Mar 2022 5:34am
24th Mar 2022 3:25am
Hey Cipher,
Loving the madbomb reference in this. I actually looked up that word out of curiosity. LOL
I was thinking of Molotov bombs. And madness in sections - quite interesting amigo.
Great piece!!
Good luck on NAPO
Bank it amigo!!! hahaha
Loving the madbomb reference in this. I actually looked up that word out of curiosity. LOL
I was thinking of Molotov bombs. And madness in sections - quite interesting amigo.
Great piece!!
Good luck on NAPO
Bank it amigo!!! hahaha
24th Mar 2022 5:28am
Madbomb is a word I made
up long ago. :)))
It is very cool to me that
the word caught your eye...
You do have an eye for such things, A.
Thank you for your cool perspective.
Oh...
And mentioning NAPO.
I am seeking to anchor it into
the ether...
(Its a magical thing. :p )
"We're laughing strait to the bank with this...
Hahahaha"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTEfInwgxVs
up long ago. :)))
It is very cool to me that
the word caught your eye...
You do have an eye for such things, A.
Thank you for your cool perspective.
Oh...
And mentioning NAPO.
I am seeking to anchor it into
the ether...
(Its a magical thing. :p )
"We're laughing strait to the bank with this...
Hahahaha"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTEfInwgxVs
25th Mar 2022 11:28pm
hahahaha
Yes - I am bobbing my head while typing.
Cipher bringing 50 cent
his poems are lambo's
money well spent
banking for NAPO
sleepless event
his words are priceless
till he has to pay the rent.
ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha
couldn't help myself.
You got his:)
Yes - I am bobbing my head while typing.
Cipher bringing 50 cent
his poems are lambo's
money well spent
banking for NAPO
sleepless event
his words are priceless
till he has to pay the rent.
ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha
couldn't help myself.
You got his:)
