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bloke in the library
bloke in the library looked at
the clock; another ten minutes and the pubs would be open. he put back the book on its shelf ..
Published 20th Mar 2022
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20th Mar 2022 1:01am
20th Mar 2022 1:56am
Love the impact of this poem in such a short format. How addiction can take away the pleasure we find in the things we love, wonderfully presented. Such a sad piece but so very important to share. thank you for sharing this poem the only thing I would change is to put the last sentence as a new line so there's a longer reading pause to give more impact. Other than that I think this is perfect, beautiful brevity
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20th Mar 2022 9:16am
