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KCP
Razors in the dark,
we're getting cut up
drunk
at the local park
And my heart
won't stop
for you.
Fading hands
as they disconnect their bonds
and we're lost
and we're lost
and we're trying to
move on
too.
we're getting cut up
drunk
at the local park
And my heart
won't stop
for you.
Fading hands
as they disconnect their bonds
and we're lost
and we're lost
and we're trying to
move on
too.
Published 15th Mar 2022
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24th Mar 2022 8:16am
I like the rhyme scheme on this, it flows beautifully.
was a bit perplexed by the title, but I'm sure you had a reason for that!
Thanks
Al
was a bit perplexed by the title, but I'm sure you had a reason for that!
Thanks
Al
5th Apr 2022 3:12am
If you don't die with a couple really good secrets then you don't go anywhere magical!
