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Taking Her
light refracts through the glimmer
emitted deep amid the brazen of my eye
when I see her
reflection roaming the recesses
of this one tract mind
I come for her in the lonely
and in the dark
In awe I listen
to her serenade
a faraway pallid moon
the rhythm reverberating inside
absorbing it all and her
taking her
into the comfort
and into the confines
of my open heart and arms
emitted deep amid the brazen of my eye
when I see her
reflection roaming the recesses
of this one tract mind
I come for her in the lonely
and in the dark
In awe I listen
to her serenade
a faraway pallid moon
the rhythm reverberating inside
absorbing it all and her
taking her
into the comfort
and into the confines
of my open heart and arms
Published 15th Mar 2022
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15th Mar 2022 5:51am
This puts a more gentle and romantic shade of meaning to 'Taking Her' (which usually has a more rampant connotation):
taking her
into the comfort
and into the confines
of my open heart and arms
taking her
into the comfort
and into the confines
of my open heart and arms
15th Mar 2022 11:11pm
25th Mar 2022 6:25pm
25th Mar 2022 7:23pm
