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Emily
You looked sexy
In that blue
Bikini
On Hollywood Beach
I saw your left nipple
Cause your boobs
Didn't fill the material
Properly
But you had an
Amazing personality
I wish I could see you again
In that blue
Bikini
On Hollywood Beach
I saw your left nipple
Cause your boobs
Didn't fill the material
Properly
But you had an
Amazing personality
I wish I could see you again
Published 12th Mar 2022
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12th Mar 2022 11:26pm
13th Mar 2022 2:05am
13th Mar 2022 11:42am
This actually sounds a fine sexy attraction for what is visible, what is visible on a woman is tantamount to be attractive to people and so your poem doesn't sound catfishing. It would be catfishing and pervy only if you said things about hidden parts. Nice poem! Kudos!
15th Mar 2022 11:34pm
I wasn't being pervy I just hugged her and she turned to leave and I saw it as she left.
17th Mar 2022 12:01pm
That's what i meant, you weren't pervy at all since you commented on exposed parts .
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2022 4:04pm
Woww 😻
